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Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 13th, '09, 20:47

A verse to the beat of Classic:

This is a true classic, this ain't your typical see-through rap shit/
Jurassic jungles hammered in my scripture, non-clattered pictures I painted/
Visions created like a collision of great shit, a decision: go make it/
Whether I'm a lyrical monster, fearful modern technology I embrace/
Collaborations I'm the ace, for rap be patient for your annihilation, keep the pace/
Steady, ready to re-load any minute firing metaphors, but see, yo/
I'm a terror in this game, bearer of the flame of hip hop, my shit pops/
Glocks quickly reloaded, I knock sickly weak posers out of the ocean in pure shame/
Potion to cure AIDS: my ability in my flexibility, fear the tears of foes I gathered in a lake/
Mathematics of rhymes, I'm a fanatic of lines dropped fast, stopped gats/
From spitting with my similes, quick to be the crown-holder, now-colder than before, flat/
Lyrics won't phase me like bitches, snitches destroyed when annoying, no toying/
Winter nights I stay up, sinners fight and get laid up with bullets in their chest/
Who's the best? No less than what you guessed; I am the genesis of this new generation, face it/
I'm the pianist of the illest chords, lyrical serial killer with the liquid swords/
Possessor of the riddle hoards, I use sickles in gore, war I start with the sickest corps/
So analyze me, surprising ain't' it? A full-course slaughter in forty minutes/
Poorly written multies are burned in a churning furnace, in hell you're pitted/
Against Satan of the mic, fates see your plight; demons arise, building a fear to fight/
I'm in a flawless state of mind, a lawless trait of night, streaks of lyrical murder/
Hysterical churner of tight rhymes, a miracle hurter in the lime light, so go assert it/
I'm a messenger to tell you you're a passenger to hell, fasten-your belts for the fucking ride/
I deserve the golden crown with my wordplay the coldest now, I ain't going to lie/
That I molded nouns out of words, sold it ounce by ounce, not material crack, lyrical crack/
My style is bitten even if my multies are mildly written from the Nile to Britain/
Leviathan of the Rappin' Sea, mad emcees want to take my throne, fake-ass go home/

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nVWW1zcZSYE (The Instrumental)
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Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic (Kanye West, KRS-One, Nas, Rakim) Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 13th, '09, 21:03

Coleon wrote:Nas freestyled to his own song :o fuckin biter...


Tell me where did I bite, dude.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 00:42

Feedback, please. :whistle:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 01:54

Coleon wrote:his whole fuckin style, his content in almost every drop


I used to think you actually listened to Nas until today.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 01:55

da.relapse.lp wrote:
Coleon wrote:Nas freestyled to his own song :o fuckin biter...


Tell me where did I bite, dude.


This ain't even Nas's song, fucktard. Tell me what album this instrumental is on.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 02:02

Coleon wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:
Coleon wrote:his whole fuckin style, his content in almost every drop


I used to think you actually listened to Nas until today.


*gives a fuck about your opinion

It Ain't Hard To Tell (Remixed Beat) is like one of my favorite songs, he's in my sig, Illmatic is a top 5 album for everyone including me, Ether is my top 3 diss tracks, his Verbal Intercourse verse was my ringtone a month ago, and to top it off I have his discography on my computer

but yeah I don't listen to him?


So where did I bite him? And you do listen to It Ain't Hard to Tell so much you decided to bite one of its best lines right off your fuck beef freestyle, fucktard.

I got his entire discographies (only studio albums and lost tapes) on my computer too...

Just answer the fucking question: if you're so Nas-educated, where the fuck did I bite him?
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 03:40

da.relapse.lp wrote:A verse to the beat of Classic:

This is a true classic, this ain't your typical see-through rap shit/
Jurassic jungles hammered in my scripture, non-clattered pictures I painted/
Visions created like a collision of great shit, a decision: go make it/
Whether I'm a lyrical monster, fearful modern technology I embrace/
Collaborations I'm the ace, for rap be patient for your annihilation, keep the pace/
Steady, ready to re-load any minute firing metaphors, but see, yo/
I'm a terror in this game, bearer of the flame of hip hop, my shit pops/
Glocks quickly reloaded, I knock sickly weak posers out of the ocean in pure shame/
Potion to cure AIDS: my ability in my flexibility, fear the tears of foes I gathered in a lake/
Mathematics of rhymes, I'm a fanatic of lines dropped fast, stopped gats/
From spitting with my similes, quick to be the crown-holder, now-colder than before, flat/
Lyrics won't phase me like bitches, snitches destroyed when annoying, no toying/
Winter nights I stay up, sinners fight and get laid up with bullets in their chest/
Who's the best? No less than what you guessed; I am the genesis of this new generation, face it/
I'm the pianist of the illest chords, lyrical serial killer with the liquid swords/
Possessor of the riddle hoards, I use sickles in gore, war I start with the sickest corps/
So analyze me, surprising ain't' it? A full-course slaughter in forty minutes/
Poorly written multies are burned in a churning furnace, in hell you're pitted/
Against Satan of the mic, fates see your plight; demons arise, building a fear to fight/
I'm in a flawless state of mind, a lawless trait of night, streaks of lyrical murder/
Hysterical churner of tight rhymes, a miracle hurter in the lime light, so go assert it/
I'm a messenger to tell you you're a passenger to hell, fasten-your belts for the fucking ride/
I deserve the golden crown with my wordplay the coldest now, I ain't going to lie/
That I molded nouns out of words, sold it ounce by ounce, not material crack, lyrical crack/
My style is bitten even if my multies are mildly written from the Nile to Britain/
Leviathan of the Rappin' Sea, mad emcees want to take my throne, fake-ass go home/

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nVWW1zcZSYE (The Instrumental)


Bite Afu-ra much? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MR8FwF0yMQk
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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:31

classthe_king wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:A verse to the beat of Classic:

This is a true classic, this ain't your typical see-through rap shit/
Jurassic jungles hammered in my scripture, non-clattered pictures I painted/
Visions created like a collision of great shit, a decision: go make it/
Whether I'm a lyrical monster, fearful modern technology I embrace/
Collaborations I'm the ace, for rap be patient for your annihilation, keep the pace/
Steady, ready to re-load any minute firing metaphors, but see, yo/
I'm a terror in this game, bearer of the flame of hip hop, my shit pops/
Glocks quickly reloaded, I knock sickly weak posers out of the ocean in pure shame/
Potion to cure AIDS: my ability in my flexibility, fear the tears of foes I gathered in a lake/
Mathematics of rhymes, I'm a fanatic of lines dropped fast, stopped gats/
From spitting with my similes, quick to be the crown-holder, now-colder than before, flat/
Lyrics won't phase me like bitches, snitches destroyed when annoying, no toying/
Winter nights I stay up, sinners fight and get laid up with bullets in their chest/
Who's the best? No less than what you guessed; I am the genesis of this new generation, face it/
I'm the pianist of the illest chords, lyrical serial killer with the liquid swords/
Possessor of the riddle hoards, I use sickles in gore, war I start with the sickest corps/
So analyze me, surprising ain't' it? A full-course slaughter in forty minutes/
Poorly written multies are burned in a churning furnace, in hell you're pitted/
Against Satan of the mic, fates see your plight; demons arise, building a fear to fight/
I'm in a flawless state of mind, a lawless trait of night, streaks of lyrical murder/
Hysterical churner of tight rhymes, a miracle hurter in the lime light, so go assert it/
I'm a messenger to tell you you're a passenger to hell, fasten-your belts for the fucking ride/
I deserve the golden crown with my wordplay the coldest now, I ain't going to lie/
That I molded nouns out of words, sold it ounce by ounce, not material crack, lyrical crack/
My style is bitten even if my multies are mildly written from the Nile to Britain/
Leviathan of the Rappin' Sea, mad emcees want to take my throne, fake-ass go home/

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nVWW1zcZSYE (The Instrumental)


Bite Afu-ra much? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MR8FwF0yMQk


I don't even know who's Afu-ra, sorry.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:36

da.relapse.lp wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:A verse to the beat of Classic:

This is a true classic, this ain't your typical see-through rap shit/
Jurassic jungles hammered in my scripture, non-clattered pictures I painted/
Visions created like a collision of great shit, a decision: go make it/
Whether I'm a lyrical monster, fearful modern technology I embrace/
Collaborations I'm the ace, for rap be patient for your annihilation, keep the pace/
Steady, ready to re-load any minute firing metaphors, but see, yo/
I'm a terror in this game, bearer of the flame of hip hop, my shit pops/
Glocks quickly reloaded, I knock sickly weak posers out of the ocean in pure shame/
Potion to cure AIDS: my ability in my flexibility, fear the tears of foes I gathered in a lake/
Mathematics of rhymes, I'm a fanatic of lines dropped fast, stopped gats/
From spitting with my similes, quick to be the crown-holder, now-colder than before, flat/
Lyrics won't phase me like bitches, snitches destroyed when annoying, no toying/
Winter nights I stay up, sinners fight and get laid up with bullets in their chest/
Who's the best? No less than what you guessed; I am the genesis of this new generation, face it/
I'm the pianist of the illest chords, lyrical serial killer with the liquid swords/
Possessor of the riddle hoards, I use sickles in gore, war I start with the sickest corps/
So analyze me, surprising ain't' it? A full-course slaughter in forty minutes/
Poorly written multies are burned in a churning furnace, in hell you're pitted/
Against Satan of the mic, fates see your plight; demons arise, building a fear to fight/
I'm in a flawless state of mind, a lawless trait of night, streaks of lyrical murder/
Hysterical churner of tight rhymes, a miracle hurter in the lime light, so go assert it/
I'm a messenger to tell you you're a passenger to hell, fasten-your belts for the fucking ride/
I deserve the golden crown with my wordplay the coldest now, I ain't going to lie/
That I molded nouns out of words, sold it ounce by ounce, not material crack, lyrical crack/
My style is bitten even if my multies are mildly written from the Nile to Britain/
Leviathan of the Rappin' Sea, mad emcees want to take my throne, fake-ass go home/

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nVWW1zcZSYE (The Instrumental)


Bite Afu-ra much? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MR8FwF0yMQk


I don't even know who's Afu-ra, sorry.


Oh, my bad, i shouldn't expect someone like you to listen to Afu-Ra.
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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:38

Sorry if I disappoint you. Makes you feel mighty now you know another black brother rapping? Actually, the first black brother rapping. Eminem is white, my bad.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:44

Were you trying to say that now i finally listen to someone black, because eminem is the only person i listen to. Thats because i made my name after one of his albums :y:
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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:45

Nah, that was a while ago. I figured joining an Eminem forum called for making an Eminem-related name, but I guess it was wrong. There can be fucktard names like classthe_king or shit like that. My bad. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:48

da.relapse.lp wrote:Nah, that was a while ago. I figured joining an Eminem forum called for making an Eminem-related name, but I guess it was wrong. There can be fucktard names like classthe_king or shit like that. My bad. :y:


Lol @ you saying fucktard.
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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:50

Lol @ you learning a new word.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Classic Freestyle

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:53

da.relapse.lp wrote:Lol @ you learning a new word.


Because fucktard is a word...We would make fun of someone a shitload for saying fucktard at my school.
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