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Mechanical Being

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 13th, '09, 23:18

molecular structure, atomic hydrophonics
hydrogen, oxygen, boxed right in, lighting sides of the phonics
I'm on it quicker then sonic, in bodies like narcotics
ionic particle beams, guarding lyrics like a rocket
Corriders and chambers, pumpin', bangin, thumpin', pangin;
highways racing, see cars pacing, red brake lights are my salvation
Photography lenses, quick frame captures
virus detections, sick brain matters
Axe-On, spraying more rhythms then black songs
electrical impulses, and you know this like mail dog
blast rhymes from the mind like I fly with parachute
any illness that comes by it doesn't scare me duke
uritium cranium, euclidian geometric precision
when I formulate forms of hate, see those hectic incisions
and I've never died, I survive, with my turbines
I heard lines of rap, like the opposite of deaf, life

Mechanical being
I am like your fucking savior
Mechanical Being
see me and I'm bucking lasers
Mechanical Being
I am never gonna stop it
Mechanical Being
With the letters I will Pop It

technological opticals watching you with lyric sorcery
I'm the source of streams, digital input in screens
High beams light teens, on the side of they jeans
Like abercrombie and fitch, I'm beside what they seem
gun powder with the tommy makes atomic thrust
fucking rugrats shot off hills cause' you lost luck
type of shine I emit, gives a blind kid a seizure
writtin rhymes, I admit, spit the lines with some ether
like a line that is sick, splittin minds of dumb leechers
wanna bite my own shit, sippin lies with one beaker
I'm the nicest around, like the shit you find in guns
spittin pounds to the sound, I spit all lines at once
If I rap you call it stunts, what the fuck you want you cunts
Flauntin' kicks like I'm a punt, bout to hit you with a pump
Cybernetic Mechanism, automatic techin' bitches
lettin snitches get the stitches and I'm back so take position


Mechanical being
I am like your fucking savior
Mechanical Being
see me and I'm bucking lasers
Mechanical Being
I am never gonna stop it
Mechanical Being
With the letters I will Pop It
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Mechanical Being

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 13th, '09, 23:22

Verses were :worship:
Hook was :worship:
favorite part was in the 2nd verse
MC Anonymous wrote:gun powder with the tommy makes atomic thrust
fucking rugrats shot off hills cause' you lost luck
type of shine I emit, gives a blind kid a seizure
writtin rhymes, I admit, spit the lines with some ether
like a line that is sick, splittin minds of dumb leechers
wanna bite my own shit, sippin lies with one beaker
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Re: Mechanical Being

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 13th, '09, 23:24

DerdyPK wrote:Verses were :worship:
Hook was :worship:
favorite part was in the 2nd verse
MC Anonymous wrote:gun powder with the tommy makes atomic thrust
fucking rugrats shot off hills cause' you lost luck
type of shine I emit, gives a blind kid a seizure
writtin rhymes, I admit, spit the lines with some ether
like a line that is sick, splittin minds of dumb leechers
wanna bite my own shit, sippin lies with one beaker

:worship: :worship: Thanks man
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Re: Mechanical Being

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 14th, '09, 03:39

bump
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Mechanical Being

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 03:45

Damn, this is crazy, the complexity of the whole thing was great. Im goona have to agree with Pk on the best part. :y:
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Re: Mechanical Being

Postby gutawafang » Sep 14th, '09, 04:24

First verse remnds me of school. :happy:

The whole verse was fucking dope. Wide vocab. :worship:

It's the usual Anonymus dope shit. :)
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Re: Mechanical Being

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 14th, '09, 14:28

wow yo basically what they all said :P It was a really sick and unusual concept and made it stand out. Really dug it man nice word usage and all that. 2nd verse was ridiculous
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
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