Chicken Scratch

[shadyallday]

i know how it feels to get writers block/ u scribble something down, u look at it the next day and ur like "the other night it was hot"/ now u gotta fight for ur spot/ u write something down right on the spot/ u think its weak so u crumple up the paper/ ur like fuck it i'll come back to it later/ u supposed to be a great rapper, so u can expect some crap from the haters/ they dont understand the creative/ process, that it takes to make a track thats amazing/ they just see ur raps as ur basis/ to whether or not u get in the game and make it...all i hear is...

what u kickin is chicken scratch/ ur shit aint sick man ur shit is wack/ i'll be in the game for years and u wont get a single plaque/ dont be mad at me cause i got the gift to rap/

all i hear is man u gotta record a demo/ u gotta go to a club and perform a single/ u gotta do more than just going around to tour some venues/ damn u dont even got a hit song/ to be honest i didnt think u were gonna last this long/ im here cause i mean what i spit/ i;ll be selling out arenas and shit/ all the fans yellin damn he is the shit!/ then there will be critics that'll say damn he is a bitch/ he'll look for any reason to quit/ i remember when i first started rappin/ all i heard was that shits not gonna happen/ u'll be the rapper that nobody heard of/ in 2 months u'll be at mcdonalds flippin burgers/ u'll be at the drive-thru writin verses/ they say this kid is wack he'll never make it he better go pick up a bat/

if ur lucky u might have one hot song/ if that shit flops then ur one shots gone/ when i make it they''ll be like how the fuck he got on?/ nobody will buy his shit not even his mom/ u can give any reason u want/ like this dude is not, the typical rapper so when his cd flops we have to laugh at him when he's workin at IHOP/ u dont have to bad mouth or be rude/ u had doubts but u knew/ that i would go multi-plat even with a bad review/ cause people hang on to every rap i spew/ they want me to feature so they can go platinum too/ they dont care what kind of wack group u attach me to they love my raps cause i love every rap i do/ i give my heart and soul when i start to flow/ cause i dont gotta be smart to know that people love my raps today, but tommorow i could be an unknown in this world all alone/

[classthe_king]

Your flow and structure were kinda off on this, and it didn't help trying to read it in the way you put it. Although i did see some good signs in there so keep working on it.

[gutawafang]

Your flow and structure were kinda off on this, and it didn't help trying to read it in the way you put it. Although i did see some good signs in there so keep working on it.

+1

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[MC Anonymous]

This shit is fucking horrible. Don't write ever again unless you put some thought into it.
Don't fill CW with more retarded shit, it's already overflowing with sub-par work.

[gutawafang]

This shit is fucking horrible. Don't write ever again unless you put some thought into it.
Don't fill CW with more retarded shit, it's already overflowing with sub-par work.

So direct!!!

[Relapse.LP]

This shit is fucking horrible. Don't write ever again unless you put some thought into it.
Don't fill CW with more retarded shit, it's already overflowing with sub-par work.

So mean!

This is Rex >>>>>