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Bittersweet Memories

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 14th, '09, 23:11

Cold and alone, broken bones, spoken tones
I sit by myself, have nobody of my own
I'm a wreck, open neck, why do I get disrespect
with a tech, I can burst, and break everybody next
But it doesn't have to be that way, see my way
If you do, then you must only believe what I say
Cause' it's a shame, my brain decaying in ways
their saving my grave, throw me in and saying no names
better off if I murdered, sever you and never remember
You stupid little people, making me cold as december
I don't even regret these thoughts, these dreams, these scenes
three beams, trinity I seen, happiness and glee
but I'm lost in nothingless, without a gun to grab
People look at me smile, damn it's fuckin' fun to laugh

stupid ugly people, evil with their arms in steaples
harmin' feeble minded sheep, catch them fishin', finding nemo
writing see through, you could see too, they aint saying nothing friendly
they just sittin, busting pleanty, while you earning, nothing, pennies
It's just that something petty, that they give you so you stop it
so you drop it, I'm a rocket, I don't stop until I got shit
in cockpit, so I'm flying, in the sky, and I'm sky diving
why I'm flying? it's because I don't wanna be that one dieing
at rock bottom, problems, columns on columns so you solve em
dissolve them, but they come back, and all they do is rob skin
I'm a stupid little child, circumstances are dire
fired from being fire, desire driving like tires, I'm higher
like the messiah, why ya wanna throw me in the abyss
what the fuck I do to you for you too skin me to bits
Your making me sick, and you now you crusify my body,
and ya crew will hide with shotties, and end me, ok you got me..
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 23:23

Haha that was dope, loved the concept. I could actually hear you rapping this as i was reading it, lol. Great flow.
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby mcZu » Sep 14th, '09, 23:32

Solid drop. Good job.
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby mcZu » Sep 14th, '09, 23:34

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
mcZu wrote:Solid drop. Good job.


solid spam :shifty:


I can't say it's solid feed, but w.e, lol.
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby mcZu » Sep 14th, '09, 23:36

^It happens to the best of us. :sweating:
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby mcZu » Sep 14th, '09, 23:38

^Lol, we should stop spamming Anon's thread. :sweating:
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 23:45

Come on guys :angry:
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby classthe_king » Sep 15th, '09, 00:01

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Come on guys :angry:


sorry :'(


It's alright i forgive you. (Quick resond so you can get to 4000!)
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby gutawafang » Sep 15th, '09, 02:54

As usual Anonymus. Dope, full of multis. :y:
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 15th, '09, 12:17

gutawafang wrote:As usual Anonymus. Dope, full of multis. :y:



:y: :b:
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby Drama Setter » Sep 15th, '09, 12:50

good job man , you are growin up very fast . Appreciate it :y:
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Re: Bittersweet Memories

Postby gutawafang » Sep 15th, '09, 12:57

drama setter wrote:good job man , you are growin up very fast . Appreciate it :y:

hmm... :shifty:
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