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Just pondering life...

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Just pondering life...

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 15th, '09, 04:15

Infected Bible scriptures in a mixture with violent pictures/
And religious malign lectures continue to form society's fixture/
On the canvas of life itself; the poor and homeless I try to help/
But simultaneously finding a cure to my health in silent stealth/
Economic struggles make us seek-upon-this puzzle's answer; the question of eternity/
A criminal’s sentence of murdering will lead to his repentance and he’ll learn to see…/
Certainty replaced permanently by doubt as evil and us begin to meld/
Where in this wicked world, a person's status solely will depend on wealth/
Creating chemical weapons while making medical venom without knowing/
Our undoing, people suing for dead presidents, residents of enemies are growing/
Impatient, life’s a bitch, we lie and snitch, but united in a twisted way/
Where we search blindly for a false fantasy of happiness while preaching “Let us pray”/

Yes, I was listening to "Life's a Bitch" before I wrote this so this is essentially influenced. :tounge2:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Just pondering life...

Postby gutawafang » Sep 15th, '09, 04:41

Structure's like a staircase, which is nice!!! :happy:

It flows pretty well and I loved the "economic" line. :y:
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Re: Just pondering life...

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 15th, '09, 04:56

Thanks for the feed. :boxing:

I don't really work on making the flow easy to rap, because when I recite the rhymes out loud, I constantly manipulate my flow anyways, so it's more fun to me to make it a little complicated. :shifty:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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