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Postby Fa-Q » Sep 15th, '09, 10:07

My suggestion (and I'm not being a smartass honest) but you've adopted Ems style with the killing and mentioning names like Hannibal...I suggest you don't do that
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Re: some KrAyZy shit here!! check it out!

Postby gutawafang » Sep 15th, '09, 13:32

Sounds like it's being written to the Medicine Ball beat.

Out of ten:

Structure-7
Flow-10
Rhymes-0
Multis-8
Vocab-4
Punches-6
Other-fuck a brother from another mother of other colour shit. That's too common.

Overall, it's pretty good man. I like the flow and the number of syllables per line. I mean, it just fits. Keep it up homie. :flower:
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Postby Drama Setter » Sep 15th, '09, 13:38

Yo Krayzy I like whatcha doin out there , keep it up homie , cha :b:
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Postby gutawafang » Sep 15th, '09, 13:45

EDIT: Multis-10 :y:

I just read again. Fucking dope. :flower:
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Postby Solace » Sep 16th, '09, 13:04

Definitely made me think you were tryna bite Eminem at first, but reading your comment it's all good then. Nice multies and the vocabulary you used was perfect for this content. Nice piece K :y:
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