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Random Diss

Postby D'Leh » Sep 15th, '09, 18:19

(verse 1)
I told you id be back here i am with animal rap part two,
Fuckin with D'Leh ill bite ya face off and chew,
Im DL and im fucking cannibalistic,
Im the son of the devil Im fucking sadistic,
This is about to get gory so realistic,
Your about to get destroyed by ME your just another statistic,
Ill rip you apart like a crocodile,
I show no mercy im fucking hostile,
Cus D'LEH bites harder than an alsation,
Ill put your hole crew in a state of damnation,
this is my fucking verbal creation,
Its time for you to die pick the location,
Im about to change my genetic structure like fucking mutation,
All you wannabees and fakes face starvation,
your noffing compared to me theres no relation,
If you decide to diss me expect retaliation,

(hook)
This is animal rap,
Get yourself blown off the map,
This is animal rap,
Lyrics that make ya neck snap,
this is animal rap,
ive got ya in my fucking trap,
yea killah this is animal rap,
animal rap,

(verse 2)
This is animal rap your about to face decapitation,
Ill cut off ya arms and legs like fucking amputation,
you cant battle me im the king of verbal confrontation,
Your about to experience dehydration and fucking desperation,
Beef with THIS is a bad situation,
I cause pain beyond your fucking toleration,
I spread dread across entire nations,
I spit power to devower the hole worlds population,
Im about to end your life time for your termination,
You cant be saved theres no fucking salvation,
Ill lyrically destroy an entire generation,
This is animal rap i dont need a fucking explanation,

(hook)
This is animal rap,
Get yourself blown off the map,
This is animal rap,
Lyrics that make ya neck snap,
this is animal rap,
ive got ya in my fucking trap,
yea killah this is animal rap,
animal rap,
x2
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Random Diss

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 15th, '09, 18:28

I like it. Kinda like Jedi Mind Tricks "Animal rap huh :P
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Random Diss

Postby D'Leh » Sep 16th, '09, 02:46

thank you guysª!!!! :b:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Random Diss

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 16th, '09, 10:48

lol ,, it’s dope man ,, 1st verse is more enjoyable than the 2nd , cuz there you focused on the same rhyme scheme , I mean ( salvation , population , ) all over the verse the same rhyme scheme , makes it boring at the end ,, but the content is fire ,,, I liked the emotion’s in the piece ,, good job
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Re: Random Diss

Postby gutawafang » Sep 16th, '09, 16:32

Dope animal rap. It's just dope. :y:
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