Sighs

[gutawafang]

I’m now typing random things.

Actually no. I’m now going to write a keystyle.

It wasn’t that day you left me, I thought words were axes
To slice hearts in half bitch, wanna clear up this mess-es
Definitely no asses to rip because your faces too rich
Rich in bullshit, faggots, now eat my dazes-you-filth
Hell fucking no, I don’t know what I’m on, prolly dope
Just trying to break out of my block, gimme hope
Can an Angel fetch me? I need a cab to heaven
Call one for me, don’t make me step a seven
Stars in the day and sun in the night, you feel me?
Bars for the gays and gun in the bright, kill me
Hey, I swear I still don’t know the shits I’m typing
Stealing word after word, go on, keep swiping
Sighing, I’m so sad, a sixteen with no quality, boring
No flow, no punches, just whining, no scoring
Sad, sad, sad, feels like crying but no shoulder to cry on
Just another rhyme but this shit is over, die on

Sad. Five minutes of worthless piece of shit.

Let’s try again…

I’m speaking so loud at the weak and the proud
At the bleak and the crowd, man this sick and I’m out
I mean, I’m in, Amin, I’m mean
No doubt I’m gonna be an author with this story summing
And Gloria’s cumming, I mean, glory’s coming
Dory’s humming, for me humping
Throwing random rhymes, constantly dumping
Dunking the basketball into a property lumping
Bumping, no I’m bumming, I’m whining a-fucking-gain
With sucky brains, how do I rhyme like Gucci(Gachi) Mane?
Whatever, Kanye, just keep going West, you faggot
Don’t bother facing other directions, or that face I’ll smack it
So I tried again with no Paris Hilton images in mind
I used to have skinny chances to write punchlines that rhyme
What a weird weird costume, Lady Gaga
Wouldn’t even fuck you face-covered, maybe haha

Ah, boring. I wrote that in fifteen minutes.

Ok, I’ll do it again later. I have to take a break.

I’m in school currently because I have to take filming equipments. Tomorrow’s Thursday, which is the actual filming day.

Feedback appreciated.

[Fa-Q]

That Kanye west line was cool...and the stars in the day...bars are for gays...I contemplated (not really) swagger jacking that lol good drop

[gutawafang]

That Kanye west line was cool...and the stars in the day...bars are for gays...I contemplated (not really) swagger jacking that lol good drop

HEHEHHEHEHEHE! Thank you so much for reading homie. I totally appreciate it.

w0w....well that was..different! lol

kind of got a poetic vibe from it

i dont really know hot to reply to this, well give feedback

but yah lol i actually kind of liked it, not sure why i just do =P

to me its not as shitty as you think your drops was, i kept reading it once i started willingly, so thats a plus

rhyming was nice and it flowed well, good expression of emotions, to me.

overall not bad

you've inspired me i feel like just keystylin somethin up now!

I totally didn't expect this. Well, thank you so much for the encouragement. Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you liked it.

[Slim Zaddy]

It wasn’t that day you left me, I thought words were axes
To slice hearts in half bitch, wanna clear up this mess-es
Sighing, I’m so sad, a sixteen with no quality, boring
No flow, no punches, just whining, no scoring
Sad, sad, sad, feels like crying but no shoulder to cry on
Just another rhyme but this shit is over, die on

Whatever, Kanye, just keep going West, you faggot
Don’t bother facing other directions, or that face I’ll smack it
So I tried again with no Paris Hilton images in mind
I used to have skinny chances to write punchlines that rhyme
Feedback appreciated.

well , in the first verse you have inspired me , really nice lyrics , good multies ,, and content was full of emotions,, especially the last tow lines ,, in the second verese , i think you slip the emotion aside , and fouced on multies and rhymeing , but it's a good verse too m but flow in the 1st is better than in the 2nd , and i liked the 1st more ,, but overl all ... good piece ,, keep it up

[Solace]

That was really damn good gutawafang, and it being a keystyle is what really got me shocked. Well I didn't like the 2nd one, but I'm talking about the 1st one here. Good emotion and vocabulary you used, and the multies were pretty smooth too

[Arabian Shady]

That was really damn good gutawafang, and it being a keystyle is what really got me shocked. Well I didn't like the 2nd one, but I'm talking about the 1st one here. Good emotion and vocabulary you used, and the multies were pretty smooth too

word to that
well written fishy , keep that creative tap open dude

[gutawafang]

It wasn’t that day you left me, I thought words were axes
To slice hearts in half bitch, wanna clear up this mess-es
Sighing, I’m so sad, a sixteen with no quality, boring
No flow, no punches, just whining, no scoring
Sad, sad, sad, feels like crying but no shoulder to cry on
Just another rhyme but this shit is over, die on

Whatever, Kanye, just keep going West, you faggot
Don’t bother facing other directions, or that face I’ll smack it
So I tried again with no Paris Hilton images in mind
I used to have skinny chances to write punchlines that rhyme
Feedback appreciated.

well , in the first verse you have inspired me , really nice lyrics , good multies ,, and content was full of emotions,, especially the last tow lines ,, in the second verese , i think you slip the emotion aside , and fouced on multies and rhymeing , but it's a good verse too m but flow in the 1st is better than in the 2nd , and i liked the 1st more ,, but overl all ... good piece ,, keep it up

Thank you Zaddy. I mean, you've encouraged me a lot on MSN recently. Forever my homie.

[gutawafang]

That was really damn good gutawafang, and it being a keystyle is what really got me shocked. Well I didn't like the 2nd one, but I'm talking about the 1st one here. Good emotion and vocabulary you used, and the multies were pretty smooth too

word to that
well written fishy , keep that creative tap open dude

Oops. Sorry I double post.

Thank you so much Solace and Arabian Shady. Thank you so much for the encouragement and I'm so glad you both liked it.

[Slim Zaddy]

It wasn’t that day you left me, I thought words were axes
To slice hearts in half bitch, wanna clear up this mess-es
Sighing, I’m so sad, a sixteen with no quality, boring
No flow, no punches, just whining, no scoring
Sad, sad, sad, feels like crying but no shoulder to cry on
Just another rhyme but this shit is over, die on

Whatever, Kanye, just keep going West, you faggot
Don’t bother facing other directions, or that face I’ll smack it
So I tried again with no Paris Hilton images in mind
I used to have skinny chances to write punchlines that rhyme
Feedback appreciated.

well , in the first verse you have inspired me , really nice lyrics , good multies ,, and content was full of emotions,, especially the last tow lines ,, in the second verese , i think you slip the emotion aside , and fouced on multies and rhymeing , but it's a good verse too m but flow in the 1st is better than in the 2nd , and i liked the 1st more ,, but overl all ... good piece ,, keep it up

Thank you Zaddy. I mean, you've encouraged me a lot on MSN recently. Forever my homie.

anytime my man ,,,,,,, glad to be so .......

[gutawafang]

Anyone else?

[Yah-hah]

Yo man nice drop homie. I often just end up sittin at the computer and keystylin something kinda random. Hahahaha writing inbetween classes and all that hahahah yeah I gotcha. But yeah man really liked it nice vocab and random topics :P keep it up homie

[gutawafang]

Yo man nice drop homie. I often just end up sittin at the computer and keystylin something kinda random. Hahahaha writing inbetween classes and all that hahahah yeah I gotcha. But yeah man really liked it nice vocab and random topics :P keep it up homie

Thank you man.