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World Is Ending

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World Is Ending

Postby D'Leh » Sep 17th, '09, 19:01

(D'LEH)
Have you ever seen some one take there last breath,
have you ever stared in the face of death,
Half of you couldnt stand where i have stand,
ive been down the path to the holy land,
but my shit is as real as my spirit,
thats why when i write shit you dont even hear it,
90 percent of you people hear my words and cant comprehend,
this is why the fucking world is coming to a end,

(CHORUS)
"The world is coming to a end,
Before you know it we will all ascend,
Behold the destination its time to descend,
Well depended on its what you call a godsend"

(D'LEH)
Holy shit the world is going in a down hill spiral,
When it comes to fake rappers i am very antiviral,
Fake rap is spreading like a disease,
Im a prisoner of my own fate its seized,
People kill each other over a fucking color,
And the government is corrupt this is why they should be smothered,
If every one had the same thoughts as me there would be peace,
I have a gift am about to release

(CHORUS)
"The world is coming to a end,
Before you know it we will all ascend,
Behold the destination its time to descend,
Well depended on its what you call a godsend"

(D'LEH)
The world is so called coming to a end in 2012,
Thats when all these fraudulent rappers go to hell,
My world has already came crashing down,
Ive seen disasters happen all around,
This is a new age of reckoning i picture a different view,
I have a gift that only few do,
Writing my own autobiography,
Changing the good and starting a catastrophe,
Stop with all this behavior,
Just put me in the history book and mark me under savior

any thoughts? :flower:
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Re: World Is Ending

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 18th, '09, 15:28

that's good! :y: real nice!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: World Is Ending

Postby macdaddy019967 » Sep 18th, '09, 15:30

i liked it good job man :smoking:
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#JMG #SacJB #ToxicBuffy #Trinell #Meadows_Killas
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Re: World Is Ending

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 18th, '09, 17:10

I dig it man nice concept and the chorus was creative. Nice drop homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: World Is Ending

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 18th, '09, 20:05

Nice man rill nice...wasn't feeling the chorus idk why...also that 2012 line in the 3rd verse doesn't seem to flow well but other that that nearly perfect
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