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State of coma (big axd ;) )

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State of coma (big axd ;) )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 17th, '09, 19:44

the audio there
http://www.zshare.net/audio/657097684e8e4b04/

fucking big axe d,ur so pathetic man
yeah ...aight

keep lieing to yourself,tryna get help
its bad for your health,so,stop and get wealth
you battlin yourself,and, whooped your own ass
thinkin that we wouldnt find out the facts
behind your past,it would never ever last
fucked up childhood,that fell in the path
mate im so great, cause im real your just fake
i just wanna beef,now u better beleive how,i eat a steak,
cause axelinious niigga wont even reach my plate,
the world needs to see that you bend and break
every cake u bake is another mistake,a lesson to take
so dont partake in beatings motherfuker
suck ur own dick, guess ur just another sucker
of fuck,forgot you got a pussy
ur just a fkn sissy but bitch dont push me
cuz imma cut your throat
with the fkn shit i wrote
ur like a Hoe! ;Serious is somethin I can't do with this FAG-
ill put u on a drag,then throw you on a bag
and if that aint strong,ill get the job done
you lookin at my gun,u dont wanna see it cum
the same fkn bullet,that james R took~it
stop bein stu~pid, you gonna end for good~kid
i crunch u like a cookie
big axe, what you gonna do soilder
when the gat come out of the fuucking holster
and i hold that gun to ya motherfukn shoulders
and put your back through ya chest as it fold ya
ur just a fkn loser,i already told ya....
my mom gave me success,urs gave u rough sex
if shes upset,i let her sucks less???
u really wanna diss me get ur ass fucked
my cock is like a weapon to mass destruct
and as for fingers,imma pull the middle
-ill Leave You Mortified,modified,/More To Find-
......yeah like..i left Clues To the motherfuckn Riddle..
am I seeing illusions of beating and bruising
or is it facts gathered from reason and proving
im seeing the movement gleaming right through it
cant deny myself it’s like me and this music
you'r fkn confusin,im settin this straight
target the problem no use letting it wait
setting the bait then im propping the trap
infact stop to act like u put rap on the map
axe biggest liar,dressed,in business attire
patients ran out like the clinics on fire
im seasoned to games and im the reason to blame
had an abundance of hoe weezing my name
like a fkn weezy wannabe lil wayne
more ass then rest stops creating wet spots
been sticking more 7 ups then red dots
im that cat always landing on his feet
turned to when the plan gets out of reach
talkin bout disco but u never saw the streets
lil Axe ill have you standing on your seats
"learn to rhyme,learn to speak"wat a fkn speech
dope,but on my trash,u been recently dragged
im prowling around to get some decency back

"owhhh look at you,ur blushing ha ha ha".....
haha?...ohh ur blushing?...you sound like a faggot dude,i mean seriously though,wtf???
your just a " hoeeee"
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Re: State of coma (big axd ;) )

Postby Emadyville » Sep 17th, '09, 19:52

If you had spit Ether, The Warning, The Sauce, and Nail in the Coffin I STILL woulda said this was terrible, that's how bad your audio and everything that's involved with recording is it's pathetic. If this wasn't a diss track I woulda given constructive criticism but how the fuck can you come at Ax-D with that shit and think it sounds good?
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Re: State of coma (big axd ;) )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 17th, '09, 19:56

Emadyville wrote:If you had spit Ether, The Warning, The Sauce, and Nail in the Coffin I STILL woulda said this was terrible, that's how bad your audio and everything that's involved with recording is it's pathetic. If this wasn't a diss track I woulda given constructive criticism but how the fuck can you come at Ax-D with that shit and think it sounds good?

and u think his shit sounds good,talking about monkey in the motherfuckin zoo??lol
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Re: State of coma (big axd ;) )

Postby Emadyville » Sep 17th, '09, 20:03

le tunisien wrote:
Emadyville wrote:If you had spit Ether, The Warning, The Sauce, and Nail in the Coffin I STILL woulda said this was terrible, that's how bad your audio and everything that's involved with recording is it's pathetic. If this wasn't a diss track I woulda given constructive criticism but how the fuck can you come at Ax-D with that shit and think it sounds good?

and u think his shit sounds good,talking about monkey in the motherfuckin zoo??lol


you're obviously slow because you're talking about lyrics when I spoke about your audio, I expect this tho with what I heard and read from you :y:
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Re: State of coma (big axd ;) )

Postby SajN » Sep 17th, '09, 20:06

You have already posted this in Audio Stage.
No need to post here.
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