Forever Competition Verse (FEED MUCH APPRECIATED)

[Fa-Q]

lol i agree with you about the cockiness....idk i dont like cocky verses but it was pretty dope...i dont like the long lines just separate them into two cause its easier to read but....as far as the verse pretty dope lyrically just didnt like the demeanor of it you know...keep it up

[Fa-Q]

thanks alot for the feed

yeah i actually just recorded this, but my quality is a lil shitty, and my delivery..well it just dont seem that good, and im having problems finding a tone of voice to use...i dont know if its just me but its kind of a hard track to record, my voice aint the best so i try to use different tones and stuff for good delivery but then its just i start fucking up lol..

i might post it...its a rough version though, not very power delivery wise and crap

anyway thanks again for you thoughts

anybody else?

im having the same problem no joke....cause my voice is deeper than like Dres voice so im workin on it but yea id finalize it before you post it here...you know

[Relapse.LP]

Your multies are truly insane. PROPS.

[Emadyville]

This def was decent, you rhymed well, you kept the cockiness going altho I felt it was a little too cocky, but in rap thats how you gotta be so I can't knock that, I'm curious to hear this cause you have to bring a dope delivery and flow, good luck