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The Hole in My Heart

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The Hole in My Heart

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 18th, '09, 16:22

He looks deep into my eyes, not with a look of love or caring, but of guilt. "Who was she?" I ask, trying to hold back my anger and hurt. "Your... nevermind," he says. "Who?!" I say angerliy. "Your...your best friend, Stephine," he says. "I should of known," I say, with teaes welling up in my eyes. I try to look at him, but I find that all I can do is focus on the floor.
I can feel him slowly moving closer, and his hand rests on my shoulder to comfort me. I quickly shrug his hand away, not wanting the reassurance that everything will be okay. Everything will not beokay. I want to scream at him and tell him how hurt I am. I want him to feel the pain I'm felling. I want to him to tell me he lied, that he never really cheated that it iswas all a sick joke. I can forgive him fora joke, but not for this. I can no longer hold in my emotions. Tears roll down my cheeks. I begin to sob and sniffle, and my head begins to hurt. I look up long enough to see that he is also crying. Good, I think. Cry. Feel pain. Hurt inside just like me. We sit without talking for what it seems like eternity, but it is only a few minutes.
We both are crying. "I'm sorry," he mumbles over and over. "I'm so sorry. I never meant to hurt you. I'm sorry." Hisapologies make me cry harder. I think ofall the times he told me he loved me and how it means nothing now. I think of him with another girl, laughing and having fun. He finnally leaves me to drown in my emotions. I wonder, should I forgive him? Sholud I leave him? Will I be able to seehim with another girl, Espically Stephine? What should I do? I know no matter what I do, It will never be the same. There will always bean empty feeling, like a hole in my heart. (To: Andy.) :)
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: The Hole in My Heart

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 18th, '09, 17:00

Hey mama I feel wat your saying. I thin this is something we all end up experiencing at one time or another. You captured it perfectly. I know you deserve better than some guy that'll just "leave you there to drown". Keep your head up girl
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The Hole in My Heart

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 18th, '09, 18:53

Damn what's with all these powerful drops...good read
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Re: The Hole in My Heart

Postby Solace » Sep 19th, '09, 15:12

That was really good, I especially liked the part where you wanted him to feel pain as much as you did. Keep dropping these :y:
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