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Michael Myers

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 18th, '09, 22:35

old verse I was working on after I saw H2....just finished it today

my names Michael Myers need to find Doctor Loomis
he's the only one that i think could remove this
chip from my brain go insane cause i'm the rudest
spitting to some girls at a beach full of nudists
got a knife & mic show these hoes how I do this
say what you want cause i can leave ya toothless
toe tagging body dragging call me a nuisance
October 31st i murder high school students
come looking for me try following my shoeprints
i got this town figured out i got all the blueprints
a few years ago i even killed my sister Judith
her boyfriend & my step dad why did I do this?
because I lost it with knife right by the kitchen fosset
I was hyped up on candy corn & shitloads of chocolate
I picked up the knife since then I never dropped it
I always stay a legend aint nobody gonna top this




& now a picture of Mikey Myers & the one who played his sister in the new halloweens

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Re: Michael Myers

Postby Solace » Sep 19th, '09, 15:16

I guess you liked the movie lol...I liked this piece, im always into insane pieces, and i enjoyed how the rhyme at the end of each line was the same scheme for most of the part. Good flow too
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Re: Michael Myers

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 19th, '09, 15:37

thanks for the feed solace :y: appreciate it homie ;)
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