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Re: New add on to IM A SUBBB

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 21st, '09, 03:33

Sac's verses are utter fail, he stutters like hell when he mutters; stale rhymer/
This motherfucker claims he has a deep desire for girls, but it's clear he's such a weak liar/
From an Eminem stan to a feminine man, his personality is just disgusting/
Making fucking deals out of bullshit on the forum; it seems like he's actually lusting/
For Slim; sorry, but that'll never happen, your rhymes ain't ill like Madden/
Unless you want to dress up like Mariah, you'll never get his attention, it's sadden-/
Ing to a faggot like you, but tell me something: when's the last time you felt affection?/
I know you're trying to comfort yourself, under your pelt you're this forum's infection/

I spent 3 mn on this and it's whack, but I don't give a fuck! Sac_JB, you need to stop rhyming, :angry:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: New add on to IM A SUBBB

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 21st, '09, 05:23

I like it when she's the one n charge
She tells me I need my willy enlarged


that shit made me chuckle like a mafucker
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Re: New add on to IM A SUBBB

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 25th, '09, 16:22

nice! Keep it up! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: qudraple praise!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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