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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby Emadyville » Sep 21st, '09, 21:18

dope :y:

finish this :smoking:
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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 22nd, '09, 03:44

Deep and direct at the same time. I think it's because f your good choice of words. Awesome homie. I loved it. :)
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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby RapName » Sep 22nd, '09, 14:28

good shit. i love the intensity
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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 22nd, '09, 16:51

i have allready fed ya on msn :y: ,, but these best lyrics over here at the moment ,, really ,, dope shit ,, keep it up scotty
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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 22nd, '09, 21:57

daym you picked up a lot since what you showed me on Msn, thats real emotion
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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 22nd, '09, 22:03

dope :y:
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Y'all can suck on my ball sack- Daddycoco (Me)


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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby Solace » Sep 22nd, '09, 22:10

Damnnn Scott. Loved it. :worship:
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Re: sweetest goodbye (unfinished)

Postby Emadyville » Sep 24th, '09, 01:32

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
Emadyville wrote:dope :y:

finish this :smoking:


thanks man, added sum more :happy:


very good, ending is sick, love the should learn to never cry :worship:

Rhymes were solid in this whole piece too :y:
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