Verse 1 - Misery Business

[gutawafang]

They say time would heal and my rhymes you feel
But you lied to steal my fucking heart you chill
Froze it, and now a cold heart speaks with my vocal chords
Because the love I hand to you isn't the reciprocal sort
I'm a recidivist, so I repeat the same mistakes again
It's not like I put on acts and then I fake my pain
I'm not a playwright, not an author, not a poet
But I play right, with words that slaughter, you know it
This isn't the typical thousand raps I keep writing you
Not the ordinary arousing sex, I keep inviting you
I know sometimes I'm punitive, and I keep slighting you
It's still the same, I thief, and I keep sleighting you
Even if I say it twice, it won't suffice, cuz they lies
Whatever the fuck I'm saying, just look in my eyes
I know you can see how I drew a beauty scene
Not nudity, bitch this isn't lust, it be a fucking sin

I appreciate all feedback.

[AOBrien09]

Good read, multies good and had a nice "steady" flow to it, like how you rhymed scene and sin , Overall good drop

[gutawafang]

Good read, multies good and had a nice "steady" flow to it, like how you rhymed scene and sin , Overall good drop

Thank you so much homie.

[Slim Zaddy]

dope shit ,, keep them comming

[gutawafang]

dope shit ,, keep them comming

Arigato.

[bullet_boy46]

id listen to it

[gutawafang]

id listen to it

Thanks a lot homie.

[FAME]

I'm not a playwright, not an author, not a poet
But I play right, with words that slaughter, you know it

This is my favorite part by far. But the whole things is banging

[gutawafang]

I'm not a playwright, not an author, not a poet
But I play right, with words that slaughter, you know it

This is my favorite part by far. But the whole things is banging

Bang bang!

Thank you so much for the comment.

[bullet_boy46]

I'm not a playwright, not an author, not a poet
But I play right, with words that slaughter, you know it

This is my favorite part by far. But the whole things is banging

that best part of verse like i said mega dope

[gutawafang]

I'm not a playwright, not an author, not a poet
But I play right, with words that slaughter, you know it

This is my favorite part by far. But the whole things is banging

that best part of verse like i said mega dope

Thanks again homie. I totally appreciate it man.

[bullet_boy46]

i feel like im ass kissing

[gutawafang]

i feel like im ass kissing

HUH? Come again?

[bullet_boy46]

i feel like im ass kissing

HUH? Come again?

what? it was dope

[gutawafang]

i feel like im ass kissing

HUH? Come again?

what? it was dope

Oh. LOL. Sorry man, I didn't get that sentence. Well, thanks a lot homie.