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Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:38

It ain't directed to anyone, it's just some random shit.

Man ya lyrics are trash, I hear it and laugh then spear in ya raps,
A miracle? Nah, it's appearing you're wack and queer for my ass,
It's the spirit you lack. You could be white but ya still "Miracle" Crap,
I know that this shit is goin' pass though now I'm "Whip"ping ya ass,
Through these spherical raps I run circles around you so spastic,
While ya drop a wack diss, I drop a classic without effort I clap it,
Around ya cheeks, found ya geek friends oh so astoundingly,
Pounding the fakes failing at sounding street, yeah just imagine me,
Passionately stabbing these thousand freaks, and it's not a threat,
I promise I'll win this fight, so now see how true honest gets,
Ya voice probably sounds like its operated mechanically,
Like your voice box is fake, well I guess it runs in ya family,
Ain't even trying actually, a bit pushy when people like you get wussy,
That's probably the main reason why you ain't ever gunna get pussy,
Acting like you're creative when your lyrics are basic, so face it,
Only time you're amazing's when you write a lyric and erase it.
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:43

Props on feed.

Audio from Solace? You never know :shifty:
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:43

hmm looks like this is about me?
All you people say im wack?
Y'all can suck on my ball sack- Daddycoco (Me)


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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:45

Well it's not. And if you wanna go on about this in another post, PM me cause I would rather this not get filled with spam. Could give you many reasons why it ain't against you or anyone too if you want.
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Spyder » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:53

dope drop man, had some nice mutlies and rhymes as Scotty said
id say dont say shit just to rhyme, but if it was a quicky then dont worry bout it
still did make since tho, just ya know :p
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:54

Thanks.

Why would you bring up not saying shit just to rhyme yet it all makes sense?

Something suspicious going on :o
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Emadyville » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:54

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:nice piece, i'm going to ignore the long bars :p and say you had really nice multies and i actually flowed to it no problem, nice one. when r we gna hear sum solace audio? :o


same thing, this was reallll dope, great rhyming :worship:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:55

Emadyville wrote:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:nice piece, i'm going to ignore the long bars :p and say you had really nice multies and i actually flowed to it no problem, nice one. when r we gna hear sum solace audio? :o


same thing, this was reallll dope, great rhyming :worship:

Thanks Emady.
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Spyder » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:55

Solace wrote:Thanks.

Why would you bring up not saying shit just to rhyme yet it all makes sense?

Something suspicious going on :o

what :confusion:
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Sep 23rd, '09, 23:56

Spyder wrote:
Solace wrote:Thanks.

Why would you bring up not saying shit just to rhyme yet it all makes sense?

Something suspicious going on :o

what :confusion:

id say dont say shit just to rhyme, but if it was a quicky then dont worry bout it
still did make since tho, just ya know :p


Implying that it didnt make sense, then you say "still did make sense" lol i aint get it
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Spyder » Sep 24th, '09, 00:01

well i got it, but like idk fuck you :tounge2:
sry i dont make since i just got done fuckin triginometry im done :angry:
i dont even think i spelled it right
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 24th, '09, 02:20

those are some good punches :y: :y:




do audio :shifty:
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Spyder » Sep 24th, '09, 02:24

fuck you Ax i cant read that like most peeps :p
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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 24th, '09, 02:42

Spyder wrote:fuck you Ax i cant read that like most peeps :p


hahaha it says "do audio" :tounge2:

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Re: Murdered You (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Sep 24th, '09, 02:53

^^And the secret is revealed.

Thanks, and perhaps I will sometime in maybe Winter when I dont go out as much you know?
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