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You Never Won the Beef ( Solace diss )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '09, 11:26

damn,hes sayin he won the beef vs me,i never thought that i really put out a diss just for him only,i usually dragged him in my other beefs and took shots at him,
well there u go,and u gotta know,u know never won this beef ;)

Face it, this replacements not playing to win
ill be disgracing,ur basement,ur final layer of skin..
if beef was a sea,believe u'd always need,annon rockin' ur boat
but still u gon sound like a dog with a fkn FROG IN YOUR THROAT.
random drops,Weak shots,u better thank me for actually recognisin this fake thug
people say name speaks for itself... but soon i really am gonna have to spray slugs
and yeah solace u would get hit, cuz i knock more trey's than a perimeter shooter
u on some cartoon shit,ill make ur whole team run faster than you fat wannabe luda
u bitch gotta be kiddin Me
you'r Tryna pop a Living G
i'd call u my slave,ya know ya Diggin me
The bitch gotta Go,Whos got a hotta flow??!
I Pop At Yo....faggot you dunno how-to Blow
The Spit Will pounce Shocks Cus yall Slow
oh no,this homo dissin coco,
just to get his bozo promo
So sol,always behind annonymous,where mc annon goes Sol ever Goes
it is hilarious,since 2 years sayin hes 14 :confusion: see this fag never grows!!!
im gonna cock my glocks,Sol Cant live Without a Cock
in his mouth... thats why it keeps runnin on our block
No More Holding Back,yeah Im FolDing Raps
u'r feeling My Ice Cuz Bitch i'v Frozen facts!
ill show you the stars in the middle of the afternoon,
you goon,gonna be gone,killed,and slaughtered soon
...and never say again,that YOU ever won this beef
u never did,maybe only ur mama when she queefed


ps:this aint any kind of diss to mc annonymous :y:
and yeah solace i can diss 14 years old kids when they bug me a BIT too =)
peace
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby Tranquil » Sep 24th, '09, 12:44

Man, this shit is dope :smoking:
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby Boston » Sep 24th, '09, 13:15

why cant you diss me for
i won the beef vs you homo
so diss me
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and i PROMISE you this is all hate aside
that SUCKS. the other disses you were writing (even to axe) were much better, flow wise and everything

what the fuck is this piece of shit
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby Solace » Sep 24th, '09, 13:18

God man you really dissing me cause I said I won our beef? Lol.

I dont wanna start this again, it's over and pointless.

You coulda just PM'd me asking why I thought I won it...Anyways I think I won it cause most people liked my disses compared to yours and i won all our battle raps.

And I do age...our beef was when i was 13...im 14 now lol.
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby Noeezy » Sep 24th, '09, 13:23

not tryna hate but your structure needs some serious work.. kinda ruined it for me from the start
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '09, 13:34

Solace wrote:God man you really dissing me cause I said I won our beef? Lol.

I dont wanna start this again, it's over and pointless.

You coulda just PM'd me asking why I thought I won it...Anyways I think I won it cause most people liked my disses compared to yours and i won all our battle raps.

And I do age...our beef was when i was 13...im 14 now lol.

last year u said u was 14 LOL

Boston wrote:why cant you diss me for
i won the beef vs you homo
so diss me
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and i PROMISE you this is all hate aside
that SUCKS. the other disses you were writing (even to axe) were much better, flow wise and everything

what the fuck is this piece of shit

Boston wrote:(even to axe)

damn that sounds SO gay,is he ur Fuck buddy or something?seriously though lol u keep kissin his dick duh,get over it :whistle:

and @s about this diss i wrote it real quick and posted it , couldnt be bothered to fix it and make it look perfect,cuz its not that important :smoking:
and by the way boston,do urself a favour, fuck off lol :b:
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 24th, '09, 15:01

cool lines dam i need some help
All you people say im wack?
Y'all can suck on my ball sack- Daddycoco (Me)


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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '09, 16:26

daddycoco23 wrote:cool lines dam i need some help

:whistle:
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 24th, '09, 16:29

le tunisien wrote:
daddycoco23 wrote:cool lines dam i need some help

:whistle:


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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( @ Solace )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '09, 16:30

daddycoco23 wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
daddycoco23 wrote:cool lines dam i need some help

:whistle:


help

keep listening to rap music :unsure: Rofl
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( Solace diss )

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 24th, '09, 19:23

That was weak, this had a reali forced flow , horrendous structure, & like earlier no punchlines worthy of a diss track.. Wats wrong dude??
You need to get back up man,daym
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( Solace diss )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '09, 19:33

Arabian Shady wrote:That was weak, this had a reali forced flow , horrendous structure, & like earlier no punchlines worthy of a diss track.. Wats wrong dude??
You need to get back up man,daym

thats a fucking bullshit :n:
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( Solace diss )

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 24th, '09, 19:34

le tunisien wrote:
Arabian Shady wrote:That was weak, this had a reali forced flow , horrendous structure, & like earlier no punchlines worthy of a diss track.. Wats wrong dude??
You need to get back up man,daym

thats a fucking bullshit :n:


only thing i agree with is structure everything else was good :y:
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( Solace diss )

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '09, 19:53

bullet_boy46 wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
Arabian Shady wrote:That was weak, this had a reali forced flow , horrendous structure, & like earlier no punchlines worthy of a diss track.. Wats wrong dude??
You need to get back up man,daym

thats a fucking bullshit :n:


only thing i agree with is structure everything else was good :y:

i totally agree :y:
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Re: You Never Won the Beef ( Solace diss )

Postby AliJack » Sep 24th, '09, 21:32

le tunisien wrote:
Arabian Shady wrote:That was weak, this had a reali forced flow , horrendous structure, & like earlier no punchlines worthy of a diss track.. Wats wrong dude??
You need to get back up man,daym

thats a fucking bullshit :n:

He's always on your side when it comes to arguments and now he tellin the truth you tellin him its bullshit, gtfoh you obnoxious weak-ass faggot.
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