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Government (short keystyle)

Postby AOBrien09 » Sep 24th, '09, 21:07

Shits got me flabergasted, war governments tryna look past it,
bastard's when the new's cover's it, ya dyin ta blast shit,
over to another channel can't look at stuff from a different angle,
sameview that everythings good but shit isn't man you,
can't handle the truth can you, now who we brand the fool,
in this situation, you ! , cause you just sit on your ass debatin,
when you ain't in the past ever gave a rat's ass, a see a snake an,
what you say, ain't gon' make a difference like spellin RACECAR backward's,
gettin the same outcome, an this instance you tryna convince them with that act was,
pitfull no'one's givin you, in the public's eye the time of day, just hide away,
not gettin lyrical for the fact that spittin you, that, would just be a rhyme thrown away,

A quick an very short keystyle (5 mins max took) :shifty: feed :'(
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Re: Government (short keystyle)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 24th, '09, 21:23

AOBrien09 wrote: cause you just sit on your ass debatin,
when you ain't in the past ever gave a rat's ass, a see a snake an,
what you say, ain't gon' make a difference like spellin RACECAR backward's,
gettin the same outcome, an this instance you tryna convince them with that act was


loved that line, overall 8.5 :y:
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Re: Government (short keystyle)

Postby AOBrien09 » Sep 24th, '09, 21:27

bullet_boy46 wrote:
AOBrien09 wrote: cause you just sit on your ass debatin,
when you ain't in the past ever gave a rat's ass, a see a snake an,
what you say, ain't gon' make a difference like spellin RACECAR backward's,
gettin the same outcome, an this instance you tryna convince them with that act was


loved that line, overall 8.5 :y:


Thnks :flower:
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Re: Government (short keystyle)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 25th, '09, 07:01

nice for a keystyle man.

what you say, ain't gon' make a difference like spellin RACECAR backward's, :shifty:
That line seems planned. :shifty:
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Re: Government (short keystyle)

Postby AOBrien09 » Sep 25th, '09, 17:16

gutawafang wrote:nice for a keystyle man.

what you say, ain't gon' make a difference like spellin RACECAR backward's, :shifty:
That line seems planned. :shifty:


Thnks :flower: an suuusssshhh bout the line lol :shifty: , no but really just remeber someone mentionin it an thought it would be good to put it in a line when a could :p . (who's the new girl in your avatar :o :whistle: )
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