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My Pump Up Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 25th, '09, 07:45

I recite this right before my football games and it gets me pumped up...and I do it usually to "Requiem to a Dream" so that gets me even more pumped up...enjoy
Oh and I did this thing with the lines being no longer than 3 words



Strong and focused,
Knows no fear,
Can't be stopped,
Can only hear,
The fear trembling,
in their eyes,
His enemies talk,
About their demise,
He knows fear,
And fear knows,
He's bold faced
Thorns with rose,
All fear erased,
Never giving up,
Have all enemies,
I'm their sickness,
Without any remedies,
So be strong,
Even with tears,
As the end
Slowly quietly nears,
and soon peers,
Will know why,
All enemies have,
Nothing but fears,
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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 25th, '09, 16:15

I don't think ill ever make this a song...it couldn't keep the 3 word line rule
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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 17:48

Fa-Q wrote:I don't think ill ever make this a song...it couldn't keep the 3 word line rule

lol it pumped me up though like it said
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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 25th, '09, 18:34

Thanks for the feed bulltboy...and for everyone that knows me...I would have done multis but this aint a song so I decided not to
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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '09, 19:56

Yo I'ma do that tonight :P yeah I'm workin on a pump-up song right now you should get on it with me
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby mcZu » Sep 25th, '09, 20:12

I love Requiem For A Dream.

That said, it's not bad. Nothing special though, but if it pumps you up then I guess you accomplished what you wanted. Keep dropping.
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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 25th, '09, 20:30

mcZu wrote:I love Requiem For A Dream.

That said, it's not bad. Nothing special though, but if it pumps you up then I guess you accomplished what you wanted. Keep dropping.

Thanks Zu yea I wasn't worried about inside or multis but thanks...

And yahhah yea we doing a pump up song fo sho...
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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:35

lol i made a song called pump up unfinished :p
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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '09, 20:55

Yo grif I'll send you the verses I got after the game tonight
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Re: My Pump Up Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 25th, '09, 20:57

Yea I checked it out bulletboy
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