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Conceptum

Postby mcZu » Sep 25th, '09, 17:56

Tried something new... Every word begins with 'con' in this verse. I tried to tackle this concept while still trying to make sense. So, yes, it does make sense. Feedback is appreciated.


Conscious concepts concern contextual conducts
Contradicting contracts
Contemptuous contents containing contacts
Contacting contacted consumer consults
Consulate constructors construable constructs
Constricted constraints consternate
Conspiring constancy consoling con-rates
Consolidate con conspiracies
Consistory consigliere consigns consisted conserving conservatism conservancies
Consequents consequently conscripts
Conscribing conquests conquering convicts
Connecting connectible conjunctiva coniosis
Congressional conglomerate congiuses
Concealing confiscable confiscated confirmed converses
Conditions condemn condensational conversations
Concerning concerts
Concaved conations connecting concrete conative
Con-natives conducting con-basics conceivable
Concealments concentrated conceptive confusions
Conflicting construable conclusions
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Conceptum

Postby mcZu » Sep 25th, '09, 18:01

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:it doesn't even rhyme :whistle:


It does.
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Re: Conceptum

Postby classthe_king » Sep 25th, '09, 18:01

Wow, i didn't know what some of the words meant so i couldnt really understand it but i trust that it made sense. I tried to rap that and couldn't do it. Lmao that was insane.
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Re: Conceptum

Postby Spyder » Sep 25th, '09, 19:09

i dont even know what to say, rhyming was a little of but i got it
that was fuckin rediculous Zu :worship:
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Re: Conceptum

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '09, 20:52

Yo Zu that was sick. Rhyme scheme aint so important when your slingin all these con words out dude was sick keep it up homie
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With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Conceptum

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:54

dope :y:
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Re: Conceptum

Postby mcZu » Sep 26th, '09, 00:01

Thanks everybody, appreciate it.
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