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Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby Tranquil » Sep 25th, '09, 18:29

You wanna go and fucking diss me,
after i dissed you, you still wanna diss me,
i warned you in the first one,
i can flip into a lyrical mode, just like big pun,
so next time, you better think about,
coz i will leave you with a body like a fuckin trout,
and you go fuck your aunt,
who thats rite, coz your dicks the size of an ant,
you better look at the backround history,
before you start dissing me,
or any other person,
you think that your disses are good coz they got so much cursin,
fuck off, you rip off other peoples rhymes,
and post it in the new york times, as yours,
thats a foney to me, i can site hear and make threats,
like your body floating out to sea,
but your not worth it, you can go curse it,
"ahh eminemlegend is not good, he aint even from the fucking hood"
its good not being in the hood, on some surcumstances,
at least i can get more that fucking lap dancers,
so this is the last time, me kicking a diss rhyme, to you,
ok your done, i will destroy you,
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 18:30

You wanna go and fucking diss me,
after i dissed you, you still wanna diss me,
i warned you in the first one,
i can flip into a lyrical mode, just like big bun,


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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby SajN » Sep 25th, '09, 18:34

this was veeeery bad.

Basic rhymes, and bad rhymes.
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby Wic Kid » Sep 25th, '09, 18:36

bullet_boy46 wrote:
You wanna go and fucking diss me,
after i dissed you, you still wanna diss me,
i warned you in the first one,
i can flip into a lyrical mode, just like big bun,


R.I.P Daddycoco


Why the hell did u quote those 4 lines? Diss aint bad, but these lines u quoted are the worst part of it.
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby Tranquil » Sep 25th, '09, 18:38

SajN wrote:this was veeeery bad.

Basic rhymes, and bad rhymes.

Yes i no, its 3 in the morning where i live, but anyway, i think its a solid diss towards him, lol
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 18:38

Termin8er wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:
You wanna go and fucking diss me,
after i dissed you, you still wanna diss me,
i warned you in the first one,
i can flip into a lyrical mode, just like big bun,


R.I.P Daddycoco


Why the hell did u quote those 4 lines? Diss aint bad, but these lines u quoted are the worst part of it.

lol i just like the way it rhymed :y:
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby Wic Kid » Sep 25th, '09, 18:50

bullet_boy46 wrote:
You wanna go and fucking diss me,
after i dissed you, you still wanna diss me,
i warned you in the first one,
i can flip into a lyrical mode, just like big bun,



lol i just like the way it rhymed :y:


The way it rhymed?

".............fucking diss me
..........still wanna diss me"

Yeah man. Fuckin brilliant. I dont how could anyone come up with that... :coffee:
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby Tranquil » Sep 25th, '09, 19:16

Termin8er wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:
You wanna go and fucking diss me,
after i dissed you, you still wanna diss me,
i warned you in the first one,
i can flip into a lyrical mode, just like big bun,



lol i just like the way it rhymed :y:


The way it rhymed?

".............fucking diss me
..........still wanna diss me"

Yeah man. Fuckin brilliant. I dont how could anyone come up with that... :coffee:


I think he ment "i warned you in the first one, I can flip into a lyrical mode, just like big pun"
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby BILI » Sep 25th, '09, 19:39

Whats wit all these Daddycoco 23 disses?
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 19:40

BILI wrote:Whats wit all these Daddycoco 23 disses?

he was acting like a dick :whistle:
plus i want you to check out my rap called engage :happy:
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '09, 20:04

Yeah bro it was a pretty weak diss man no lie. Basic ryhmin and all that. I guess Dadycoco23 is pretty popular huh :P
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby BILI » Sep 25th, '09, 20:05

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah bro it was a pretty weak diss man no lie. Basic ryhmin and all that. I guess Dadycoco23 is pretty popular huh :P

yeah he is I guess,but I still dont know what he did so that everyone is dissin him :unsure:
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:59

oh shit!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '09, 21:02

BILI wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Yeah bro it was a pretty weak diss man no lie. Basic ryhmin and all that. I guess Dadycoco23 is pretty popular huh :P

yeah he is I guess,but I still dont know what he did so that everyone is dissin him :unsure:


Yeah dude I'm pretty confused. Does somebody wanna explain it to me?
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Re: Ok, Your Done (Daddycoco23 Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 21:02

Yah-hah wrote:
BILI wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Yeah bro it was a pretty weak diss man no lie. Basic ryhmin and all that. I guess Dadycoco23 is pretty popular huh :P

yeah he is I guess,but I still dont know what he did so that everyone is dissin him :unsure:


Yeah dude I'm pretty confused. Does somebody wanna explain it to me?

he was acting like a dick solace said :whistle:
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