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Some love song

Postby BILI » Sep 25th, '09, 20:01

Wow I havent wrote nothing for like a month till now

I hope I never really hurted you I hope I never broke you heart
If I did,I`m sorry,plz gimme chance for new start,we should just restart
Main pain is 2 deep,I think about you every time before sleep
Now I understand that price to your heart ain`t that cheap
When I`m not wit you I feel sadness,when act bad I feel heartless
Only time I feel really happy is when I`m wit you,all I need is us 2
Trust me if you give me new chance I won`t screw,now I`m new
Persone,persone that only lives for you.my heart belongs to you

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Re: Some love song

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:01

deep shit :y:
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Re: Some love song

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '09, 20:07

I dig it man nice touch homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Some love song

Postby BILI » Sep 25th, '09, 20:14

thx guys
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Re: Some love song

Postby Spyder » Sep 25th, '09, 20:30

needs some multies man, and make sure every line rhymes
BILI wrote:Now I understand that price to your heart ain`t that cheap
When I`m not wit you I feel sadness,when act bad I feel heartless
Only time I feel really happy is when I`m wit you,all I need is us 2

none of that rhymed :y:
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Re: Some love song

Postby BILI » Sep 25th, '09, 20:33

Spyder wrote:needs some multies man, and make sure every line rhymes
BILI wrote:Now I understand that price to your heart ain`t that cheap
When I`m not wit you I feel sadness,when act bad I feel heartless
Only time I feel really happy is when I`m wit you,all I need is us 2

none of that rhymed :y:

yeah I know been on a break for like 3 weeks so I need to get back :D :y:
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