Carry On

[Solace]

Quick lil verse I wrote..

Pain is now eroding me but hopefully I'll cope you see,
Too busy with your friends and family to even notice me,
I wrote this piece to show the pieces of my heart left...
Before the pieces become diseases in the darkness...
Pardon me for fucking caring and for showing up,
Like a dagger in my stomache stabbing slow it sucks...
Burdens for me but all you have to do is close the curtains,
Turning the blind eye while I waste away just burning,
I'm learning, that once I show a sign of vunerability,
A force of sorts is born and runs to start killing me,
Beautiful girls, oh yeah I could have a million see...
But none of them could possibly make these feelings ease,
They're real indeed and spearing me, I'm giving up,
But once I wrote that the point of life is to live it up,
Happiness isn't appearing much, for real it sucks but I try,
Pretending it doesn't matter, but the man in the mirror dies.

[bullet_boy46]

Pain is now eroding me but hopefully I'll cope you see,
Too busy with your friends and family to even notice me

overall deep shit

[lilrossy]

I wrote this piece to show the pieces of my heart left...
Before the pieces become diseases in the darkness...

man this sum deep shit, i love it. nice flow and lots of emotion, overall a good read. keep it up.

[Solace]

Thanks guys

[Drama Setter]

good drop man , thx

[bullet_boy46]

good drop man , thx

dram check my rap called tick-tock need pointers besides solaces excellent tips

[bullet_boy46]

solace, are you in love .. ?

nice verse, i loved it.

[mcZu]

Solid drop, your getting better and better.. I enjoyed reading it.

[Solace]

Thanks guys.

@Scotty, lmfao,

[classthe_king]

wow dope shit You keep gettin better and better with every verse, keep it up.

[Solace]

Thanks bro.