Fa-Q - Unnamed song about a Girl

[Fa-Q]

By the way that's not the title...I have no hook (probably won't have one) but its about this girl I like... She's honestly the most beautiful girl I've ever seen...she's amazing and all of this I wrote about her...enjoy



Dear Bre, please hear me,
You got a smile that makes me freeze in my tracks,
And Bre, your breeze distracts,
It distracts and your breeze makes,
me stop and each of my knees shakes,
Your like a majestic bird who sings pride,
So tell me Bre, where do your wings hide,
Your sweet voice is like a birdies song,
I look at you, and see sturdy and strong,
You imprisons my pages with ink about you,
My mind engages, when I think about you,
Your like a dove when it takes flight,
Every wrong, youre the one that makes it right,
You make all my sad days all right,
And make my mind in a haze all bright,
I don't know why you wear those glasses,
Each lense hides your eyes,
Like sand glistening on a beach,
and then the tides rise,



Your sun rays flash,
As each days past,
When you swept me off my feet,
I knew I may crash,
My beating heart slows down, cause she takes half,
She got a laugh, that makes you laugh,
She makes my night day,
My sadness happy right away,
Bre on a cloud, with a harp and halo,
She makes my dark day glow,
She puts me on cloud eleven,
The type of angel, that makes heaven a proud heaven,
Your beautiful bright smile,
Makes me write a while,
But soon turns lines to pages,
The thought of you imprisons my mind in cages,
I wanna see your brown hair,
I traveled to your heart, let me tell you what I found there,



You have flowing hair, without showing you care,
I feel your presence, without knowing your there,
You resonate beauty, like a growing glair,
When I look into your blue eyes,
I see a reflection and two skies,
I see them and I gasp for air,
I ask and swear,
this will be my last stair,
I just beg that we lock eyes,
I see you talk to guys,
It doesn't matter the clock tries,
To speed up, what I want us to be at the end,
More than just a friend,
But I have to get the courage, for the message I must send,
It'll happen one day, maybe tomorrow or the next,
All I know is when I'm around you, my sorrow corrects,
If I could only borrow that hex,
You put on me, and let our lips meet,
And please revive me, when my heart skips a beat,

[Fa-Q]

Do you think I need a hook?

[DƎRDYPK]

I don't think it needs a hook
it's nice without one
i like those verses
my favorite verse would have to be the 3rd

You have flowing hair, without showing you care,
I feel your presence, without knowing your there,
You resonate beauty, like a growing glair,
When I look into your blue eyes,
I see a reflection and two skies,
I see them and I gasp for air,
I ask and swear,
this will be my last stair,
I just beg that we lock eyes,
I see you talk to guys,
It doesn't matter the clock tries,
To speed up, what I want us to be at the end,
More than just a friend,
But I have to get the courage, for the message I must send,
It'll happen one day, maybe tomorrow or the next,
All I know is when I'm around you, my sorrow corrects,
If I could only borrow that hex,
You put on me, and let our lips meet,
And please revive me, when my heart skips a beat,

I'm feeling that ^^^^^
nice drop

[Fa-Q]

Thanks for the feed Derdy

[FAME]

This is sooo nice. Plus love the rhymes You better be showing this or preforming this for Bre. There will be no way she can say no.

[macdaddy019967]

:wub: This is sooo nice. Plus love the rhymes You better be showing this or preforming this for Bre. There will be no way she can say no.

agreed...and u have a pic of this girl?

[gutawafang]

Wow. I like the choice of words man. Poetic, I feel it bro.

[Yah-hah]

Yo grif man I been waiting to see wat you could do with a subject like this. I really dig it man it flowed good and all that. It had soul man was really smooth. Don't know who this chick is but she has to see this for real, Nice work Grif

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Fame...I plan to show her

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Jus...foreal this girl is beautiful

[Yah-hah]

who is she?

[Fa-Q]

who is she?

Her name is bre...*nd I hid things in this song about her name

[Fa-Q]

Wow. I like the choice of words man. Poetic, I feel it bro.

Thanks guta

[Emadyville]

Very good, I enjoyed this, I thought the lyrics 100% fulfilled the concept, some of that shit was real poetic, very good work

[Fa-Q]

Wow thanks Emadyville...did you find this through Shady Shots? Thanks for the feed too