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Practice

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 27th, '09, 19:22

Aiiyo, non pre written I'm just gonna let it flow

I step to those with weapons..bold, blastin' seven fold
grab them, decapitate at faster rates, elevens told
you to get back, I let tracks smack backs like crack, thats
attacks of a gat, retract ya spinal from the rest of ya back
a best with this rap, vertabreas prey from words I spray
curse in ways to burst ya day, quicker then night, I say
You'll be killed with a killer instinct, cinder-block your face
I blender rocks to base and inject it to my face, like botox, pray
i'll never be finished, letters cause squeemish bitches to puke
tactician will juke, defenders defences quicker then mew
I'm a hardrock bar jock, with more glocks to knock with balls dropped
deck the halls, pop your face like a virgin cherry, I'm not
gonna stop, until I'm top of this rap scene, ill like vaccines
and maxine, yet when I'm on this fuckin' mic my acts clean
I crack spleens with rap streams of fire from my bad dreams
like a anti-Luther, I mart-in-kings with the K like groceries
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Practice

Postby macdaddy019967 » Sep 27th, '09, 19:29

mc anon does it again :smoking:
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#JMG #SacJB #ToxicBuffy #Trinell #Meadows_Killas
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Re: Practice

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 27th, '09, 19:35

Not my favorite piece you've done but still good...I like your old style where you rape people with words...use this one but don't forget about your old style...
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Re: Practice

Postby classthe_king » Sep 27th, '09, 21:55

Damn, this was good for a quick keystyle. Your flow is great.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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