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Re: misunderstood

Postby J Roc » Sep 29th, '09, 01:55

I told the teacher i'm Misunderstood
And that's the only thing Miss Understood... ;)


Haha i had to quote a line so i figured i'd quote mine :whistle: ... Jokes i read the whole thing, i like the broken heart ish every now & then.

Love the flow it made it even sicker... Except

and i'm not resting at all, just been arrested at the mall

kinda screwed the flow up for me, when ya broke the multie lol ..

Three Thumbs Up :y: :y: :y:
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Re: misunderstood

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 29th, '09, 11:30

i liked the concept, i agrree with roc about that 1 bar too...its kinda simple from what you were previously writing, that shit was dope.
This looks a lil simple from your previous verses haha
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: misunderstood

Postby classthe_king » Sep 30th, '09, 03:27

Nice, the whole thing flowed perfectly, you had great rhymes and obviously good lyrics. Usual scotty piece.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: misunderstood

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 2nd, '09, 20:58

Dope drop homie. Love the concept all around sick man keep it up bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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