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Postby J Roc » Sep 29th, '09, 02:54

Simmering On the Punchlines,Wordplays until i get the Rusting Off...Someone gotta inspire me haha..

This Song? The Reason Is..Meaningless
I'm So Spaced Out Right Now..I Dunno Whut the Meaning Is... lol
I Got No Memory.. I Went From Talking About a Kid Who Resembled Me..
To Gun Play, One Day I'mma Let Em See
Want an Oxymoron That'll Help ur Life, Asshole?
Get a Glass yo, Then When ur filling it look at it as Half-Full
I'm in Class In Last Row, Prallly Lighting a Joint In a circle Let It Pass Tho
Teacher comes Reach For Some Give her a Handful
Pills Leave her dismantled I'll teach-the-class bout weed-&-hash Here's a Gram Yo
Next-Time u Get-high? Say Hi To Ya Neighbors..
Were Better People Because Of It, Were Admiring Nature
Everyone Else Just Trying To Make Work, We getting Fried & Liking The Flavour
Spitting Nuttin But Nonsense..It's been Prally 30 lines Since This Song Lost Its Concept
I'm That Toxic...I'mma go back to weed cuz i like that topic... lol fuck my life
Stop reading this.. go get a joint Before u finish Seeing This
Light up..Yes Like That Get High Son... Until u Finish It
Go Onto Youtube And Watch Some Trippy Shit.. Get ur Frreak On
But Put that shit out as soon as u start to Seee God
hold it right.. this next lines goes to the government & the voters iiight?
Fuck off with that shit i never voted for u to control my life
Think i'm joking to you?
the fuck u gonna run a countrey when less then half of it voted for you...
we don't run the countrey or own it ... u can confess to that
So We Can't give u the power or the Land that we never had....
Soome chick that texted me wrote:Do you have any condoms?

Jussss Let Me Get a Feel, And Pick Whut's Real
It's too bad these pedophiles can't get a chick that's legal
Get The Stash Involved.. Jus Lemme Hash Da Bong
Whut's So Bad About This? I Wrote-That Whole-Rap And Jus Rambled On ^^^





Hahaha dun even read that if i was you...Lol! ... link me to some shit that'll inspire me yo











EDIT ::::::::::::::::::::::::: Re-read it and i toook out the lines i wasn't feeling.
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Re: Spaced out

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 29th, '09, 06:29

Randomly dope, dude. :smoking:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Spaced out

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 29th, '09, 11:25

that was funny, nice laid back lyrics, lost the flow in the end tho coudnt figure how to bump to that shit!


Want an Oxymoron That'll Help ur Life, Asshole?


shots fired? :o

Aiyo roc, could you feed my verse as well?? its called The Return :flower:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Spaced out

Postby J Roc » Sep 30th, '09, 11:17

Thanks guy's .. i'll peep it when i get home from school i gottta go in like 3 minutes lol
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Re: Spaced out

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 7th, '09, 06:24

Hahahahah REALLY laid back punches. funny though. your lyrics got like the little personalities at the end man I'm lovin it be crackin me up man. Keep bringin homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Spaced out

Postby Solace » Oct 7th, '09, 21:57

Lmfao dope :y:
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