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Madman's Journal

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 29th, '09, 20:52

Villianous man slaughter, and your man oughta
dive and hide, fore' I fill them with lead; monster-
-slaughters, life will cost ya bunch of lives, the
wives inside lie, gutted with knives, tortured
welcome to the chambers of murderous rage
burnin this page, enraged, with the words I just paved
burn hair to silk, I'm cuncocting a quilt
poppin some pills, scared and built, I'm opting to kill
reversable reflection, with physical strenght
vampire turns human, with lyrical length
rap manufacturer, executes a massacre
hex a group of passengers, faster then an acrua
rapid fire turbines turn rhymes to clap the liars
capture higher levels of mic treble to rap with fire
palms will harm ya, a bomb to call the
smoke to ya throat, Anonaconda

Word Violence pries with pain, curse silent
verb tyrant, actions trap them, burst iron
spurt lines then rhyme them crack backs till spine bends
reach inside your mind from behind ya eyelids
willing for killing, spilling blood inside of your building
concealing a weapon, agression endin' ya feelings
pyschopathic pyro addict maniac inside this attic
insane with raps, a brainiac, fire with this nitropathic-
-telekenesis, bout to burn you with these lips
selling the pieces, to your mother for cheap cents
kill fetus with three clips then eat it
as it leaks with, pure blood from vaginal creases
meanest genius, flow so seamless
beat kids speechless, reap with these fists
verbally vicious, quick with this spit shit
gifted with sentence, rip it in instants
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Madman's Journal

Postby classthe_king » Sep 29th, '09, 22:36

Haha damn, some dope lines:

welcome to the chambers of murderous rage
burnin this page, enraged, with the words I just paved
but that whole second verse was fire:

pyschopathic pyro addict maniac inside this attic
insane with raps, a brainiac, fire with this nitropathic-

Got a little crazy at the end
kill fetus with three clips then eat it
as it leaks with, pure blood from vaginal creases

keep it up
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Madman's Journal

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 5th, '09, 15:53

:y:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: Madman's Journal

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 6th, '09, 18:48

Came dope with it as usual. Last verse man seriously crazy man. Always solid with the rhymin man. Keep at it big homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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