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Something I'm Not [First Time Writing To Club Beat Lol]

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Something I'm Not [First Time Writing To Club Beat Lol]

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 29th, '09, 22:56

Insomiac, eyeballs open, resisting arrest
I'm spittin the meth, breaking you with slits in ya cleft
what is that? I'm just a monsterous conscious poppin optics
I rocket across the sky with the gwap in my pocket
bang hoes like street poles, in middle of bar war
you brittle as car doors, little sized card board
high in the sky, that I'm face to face with God
make ya body erase in space like apollo pods
I live for the green, to see my face on the scene
sit in theater with popcorn, reliving my dreams
Rolling stacks of dough, bowling crack to hoes
flow is wack to those who don't know jack from joes
I'm a God, they aint nothing weak about me
So I skip saturday, and make you weep about me
couldn't live without me, a hustler mindset
selling water to neptune, and fire to Ra, yes.

All you east side bitches throw it up (throw it up)
All you west side bitches show it sluts (show it sluts)
All the rest of you niggas, just empty bottles of jin ( jin)
I'll show you motherfuckers what it takes to win (win)

I got a buncha problems when I rhyme this way
and a lot of motherfuckers try to light my day
I fight in ways, then light sight with sprays
cause in my days, bitches like you gets knives, K?
tat a microphonbe to tounge so the feed is real
I show you stupid motherfuckers how to head the kills
I whipe my fuckin' ass with ya cash then laugh
then I spread it across your body then tell you take a bath
It's a bum rushin agression, pumpin intestines, no questions
humpin the sections of vagina, nina bustin likes techs and
fuckin your chest then like erections, I'm off of my rocker
and you the type of faggot that would scare off chris crocker
Popin ya non stop, quicker then addicts of valium
you ask me for a pill, I grab it, say ''all of them''
I say, ''I need these to survive, otherwise I will die
give me that green, give me that cush, I will survive''

All you east side bitches throw it up (throw it up)
All you west side bitches show it sluts (show it sluts)
All the rest of you niggas, just empty bottles of jin ( jin)
I'll show you motherfuckers what it takes to win (win)
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Something I'm Not [First Time Writing To Club Beat Lol]

Postby Spyder » Sep 29th, '09, 23:09

[quote="MC Anonymous"]Insomiac, eyeballs open, resisting arrest
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thanks for the shouty :shifty:
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Re: Something I'm Not [First Time Writing To Club Beat Lol]

Postby gutawafang » Sep 30th, '09, 00:27

LOL. You made an audio club song before. Remember? I was waiting for you to do it again. Now it's here. :y: :y: :y:

I like the idea of using the word "knives" in club songs. :shifty:
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