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Wrong Crowd(keystyle)third one i ve done need feed

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Wrong Crowd(keystyle)third one i ve done need feed

Postby Just Silver » Oct 4th, '09, 20:14

They say im in the wrong crowd
i say im in the right crowd
the shut up and light crowd
they say i shouldnt be hangin
with a bunch a potheads with instrumentals bangin
or tryin robitussin mixed with fruit punch n
swallowin ecstacy buttons
wait dont do that
you might lose your mind
give up and use crack
those phrases, im used to that
tryina make pussy bleed like i abused a cat
a more type of fluent rap
a much better approach than the stupid have
live once die forever
life is high so im skydivin rebel
trying to get diamonds embezzeled
in my wrist and say im past
way in front of these foolish fags
that have no idea when a good time was had
bragging about figures
guys become misters
dudes become lame
and pardon my english
must speak proper
fuck that shit
hang with the wrong crowd
you know i did
(just something quick i did since my other one got no feedback :( hope for constructive criticism :)
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Re: Wrong Crowd(keystyle)third one i ve done need feed

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 7th, '09, 05:23

hey man sorry I missed the other 2 Ima go check em out. Not bad man not bad. Kinda different flow with the really short lines but was pretty good. Love the first three lines man just flow real perfect for me. Keep droppin though homie I'll be lookin out for ya. Peace :b:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Wrong Crowd(keystyle)third one i ve done need feed

Postby Just Silver » Oct 8th, '09, 00:24

Yah-hah wrote:hey man sorry I missed the other 2 Ima go check em out. Not bad man not bad. Kinda different flow with the really short lines but was pretty good. Love the first three lines man just flow real perfect for me. Keep droppin though homie I'll be lookin out for ya. Peace :b:

thanks for feed its real important to get it so thanks again for giving some :y:
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Re: Wrong Crowd(keystyle)third one i ve done need feed

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 8th, '09, 21:00

3m1n3m Silver wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:hey man sorry I missed the other 2 Ima go check em out. Not bad man not bad. Kinda different flow with the really short lines but was pretty good. Love the first three lines man just flow real perfect for me. Keep droppin though homie I'll be lookin out for ya. Peace :b:

thanks for feed its real important to get it so thanks again for giving some :y:


I gotcha man just keep flowing and poppin them verses out and you'll get recognition man just keep at it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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