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Postby mcZu » Oct 4th, '09, 22:11

Beat used.

Like north Africa this tune is a pledge
For a woman who resembles Elisar from Carthage
I’m standing on my hearts edge
So I dance in balance looking for that truce
‘Cause she’s addictive like liquor juice
Not talking about readers of the Torah
Like Isis to Ra she’s my Cleopatra
Her aura is addictive like a Hookah
I’m hooked to a Nefertiti like woman
Tagged me like graffiti so she is to whom I run
She’s like Esther from the ancient Iran
Like the straits of Tiran an access point to my heart
Like incense she overwhelms from the start
In that sense in aint hard to tell
That forbidden apples won’t do harm call me William Tell
(I'm addicted)
Last edited by mcZu on Oct 4th, '09, 22:22, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Addicted

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 4th, '09, 22:22

good drop Zu...is this for a girl
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Re: Addicted

Postby mcZu » Oct 4th, '09, 22:23

Fa-Q wrote:good drop Zu...is this for a girl

Thanks, and yeah it is.
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Re: Addicted

Postby classthe_king » Oct 4th, '09, 23:26

haha wow, that beat is wild. I liked the song and all the Africa references.
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Re: Addicted

Postby mcZu » Oct 5th, '09, 20:55

classthe_king wrote:haha wow, that beat is wild. I liked the song and all the Africa references.


Thanks Class/Sentus. :b:
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Re: Addicted

Postby classthe_king » Oct 5th, '09, 22:57

mcZu wrote:
classthe_king wrote:haha wow, that beat is wild. I liked the song and all the Africa references.


Thanks Class/Sentus. :b:

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Re: Addicted

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 6th, '09, 18:46

Yeah man the Africa references were fresh. Always droppin hot man keep at it :b:
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