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Ok the rules are simple, rate the persons piece on a scale from 1-10 then post your favorite piece...then so on and so fourth...no breaking the chain....I'll go first


I've always wanted to paint these walls,
Phones off the hook I doubt it recieves calls,
Til after each one of my knees falls,
I'm looking down the barrel to say I've seen my doom,
All my belongings together in my clean room,
The last thing ill remember is that one joke girl,
The last thing ill see is the gun smoke swirl,
My room isn't a hospital,
So please call an ambulance as soon as possible,
It won't matter ill die a groom alone,
My spouse this grey tomb stone,
And at noon I'll be home
This morning my final sunrise shined,
My pupils ajust as each tries and find,
Jokes on me now my eyes are blind,


I guess my time has come,
As soon as this rhyme is done,
Ill be done,
So guard your heart before the next girl takes it, and breaks it,
My time has come,


The hallways cleared,
Which I always feared,
She's the slut I'm the dunce,
For some reason all the lockers shut at once,
My ears perk up at the sound of her voice,
But how could I tell her when she's around other boys,
But now she's with her other dimwit friends,
If she only knew I didn't care about her split ends,
Even though carbons free,
She made it hard to breathe,
I'm doodling her name in a heart,
Oh no here comes a flame and a spark,
But as soon as she brought it she doused it with the rain and the dark,
I boarded her plane and she taught me how to fly,
My friend my enemy who shot me out the sky,
So ask yourself when did you cross the line,
Cause your sanity cost me mine,


I guess my time has come,
As soon as this rhyme is done,
Ill be done,
So guard your heart before the next girl takes it, and breaks it,
My time has come,


My lightbulb burned out,
I wonder how I would have turned out,
Doctor lawyer would I have gotten any taller,
Would I save a life,
And after 20 years marriage would I still crave my wife,
But my times up no more hours til my doom,
All these flowers fill my tomb,
And my spirit towers the moon,
And it reminisces that your words were a new poison found,
Now your tears on my gravesite just moisten the ground,
Next time you break a heart,
Find your cold one and take it apart,
And see your rotting from the inside out,
I hope your tears never dry out,
And when people ask what you cry about,
You'll say that note and every haunting lyric,
Was him in the form of a taunting spirit,
So just put on that fake smile,
But after you read this I hope it takes awhile,


I guess my time has come,
As soon as this rhyme is done,
Ill be done,
So guard your heart before the next girl takes it, and breaks it,
My time has come,

[Yah-hah]

Yo Grif I aint never heard that song. That was fly man. 9 straight up multis were on point for sure man.

My fingertips cringe before I even touch a single key,
Staring at this mirror like how can I ever defeat this evil me,
This evil deed I can't seem to stop myself from swinging,
I can't stop myself from screaming I'm thinking he won't get up when I'm done beating,
I can't stop myself from dreaming about the faggots demeaning statements,
The baddest of evil's hatred is in fact a savage eagle Native with a habit of smashin people's face in,
But I'm wastin my time thinking that his words won't affect me,
Like the cops on the curb won't arrest me or his boys hear the word and won't come get me,
There's no forgetting won't my angels wings both come get me,
And there's no pretending it was only her I can boast defending,
I'm embarassed and disgusted by every word in my head,
Would give anything to have her in my bed instead of all the verbs that lie dead,
This curse in my breath, his herse all dyed red, I'm hurt and it's worse when it's her that I stressed,
The dirt that I left is worse in my stead return to my bed and squirm like I said,
I turn with my head and learn that I'm dead but this isn't my tombstone,
But my name's inscribed and I'm in flames inside so welcome to my new home.