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merry christmas (one verse)

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Re: merry christmas (one verse)

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '09, 21:57

That was real dope...for some reason I read it as if you were Eminem from the Infinite time period lmao...Nice drop :y:
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Re: merry christmas (one verse)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 6th, '09, 18:41

Yeah man I agree with Am. it was like a real chill flow and the rhymes was on point. kkep holdin it down in england homie :P
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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