Fire burns inside me. My face grows hot, and rage begins to flare. I spat and sputtered words of anger, haste, and defile. The devil hissed through my teeth as other voices stopped, their mutters gone. Silence settles as the devils words spew red hot flames. I heard not a single breath, not a sigh, nor a gasp. For all who were listening were scared to move. They cower in their seats and huddle trembling in fear. My eyes hazed over, and soon my actions were not mine. I was taken over by something dark, something fierce, something that I nor anyone else could control. My anger was rising, raging, and blazing. Something sinister was happening, I had no idea how to control it....or stop it, so I let it pursue. My eyes are a blood red, for they show my thirst to fight. The walls began to shake, the floors rumbled, and the shelves trembled. My fists clenched tight, tight enough that blood dripped from where my nails entered my flesh. I let it drip. The sight of blood excites me. I let the smell of it take me away. I close my eyes as I began to lift. I'm soaring high. I open my eyes and everyone is huddled into a cornier. At my feet lay a mangled body. The sight made my bones jingle with excitement. My lips curled around into a smile. I studied it, staring at it with glory as blood pooled from the mouth. More and more came, running, taunting me to play. The sight, the smell, the joy, it all invited me in. I had to get out of here, lay low, and play this game my way.
Outside, the sun was low but shown bright. The leaves on the ground were scraping the roadway as the breeze strung them along. The calming purple-blue of the sky vanquished my anger, smothered as if it were a flame on a candle.
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by yamahiney16 » Oct 5th, '09, 22:58 
