Best Multi You've Ever Written?

[ShadySoldier90]

And while im at it, ima pull an automatic.
And when you try and grab it.
Ima pop off and let you have it.

[Spyder]

Spyderman here to decipher your plan, set fire to fans
Stick a lighter in hands, and watch you ignite where you stand.

[Emadyville]

From the beginning of the first verse in a song I wrote about 6 months ago, and only because DelinQuent, who has heard all my shit and seen most of writings said it was the best:

From passive aggressive to actin obsessive,
Back to the present where your mad and defensive,
So sad you’re expended but glad your inventive,
Relentless to grab the pen and add a sentence...

[mcZu]

Collateral abominable myocardial above nine tables
Probable to cut the un-operable nine bodies of mantras unstoppable while being able...

[classthe_king]

Sick wit Determination hes been pierced wit the fire
He's out for Extermination but hes firece wit desire

[mcZu]

Collateral abominable myocardial above nine tables
Probable to cut the un-operable nine bodies of mantras unstoppable while being able...

never do that again Canibus

I'll probably drop a Bis like verse tomorrow

[Steve Spag]

to put it simply, in all honesty it's hard to be//
regarded as a prodigy or godly on a hotter beat//
get a labotomy and follow me through oddosy's//
where wannabe's are targets of this economic sodomy//
and it is oddly sweet that quality beats quantity//
this policy that i took out exonerates me from defeat//
so you should honor me 'cause doctor's in the pharmacy//
are pondering what's bothering the darker side of all my dreams//
and they're all callin' steve like dollars in the lottery//
a portion of the green is not enough, i want a larger piece//
there's no apologies, i'm takin' all my property//
i'm makin' up a prophecy to shaken your philosophies//
i do this properly but cautiosly to cross a feat//
to possibly attain a fan who listen's to monstrosity's//
it feels like halloween, i'm stompin' 'til you're stoppin' me//
my lp will be dropping soon, so everybody cop it please//

written late 2008.

[Emadyville]

Nice one Steve

[Solace]

Damn you@McZu

I can't pick one couplet out this piece so:

Flawless Solace flows, awe and woah, how much further can Solace go?
My targets blow, got knives and nines while riding down my polished roads,
Theirs are broke, their cars can't go, 300 enemies, fuck the Spartan jokes,
They're telling me "Stop it yo". Yeah Lil Wayne dope? You just got Rick Roll'd,
And they don't know that I'm back, you rhyme wack as I literally rhyme crack,
If you tried that you'd get sidetracked, you've just fallen into my line trap,
Fast food style, while supersizing multies and flow, I can as I lie back,
Man I bet you're going to try and bite that, why else you think I write tracks?
Find a loophole when I tie ya lyrics in a knot, got every lyric from my heart,
All the spirits from the dark enlightened me to spear shit from the top,
So fuck your thoughts, "You're just a kid" yeah guys I hear it all a lot,
Fuck those dickriders, I'll attack you if you whatsoever appear up on my cock,
Bash hits, mash shit, create a classic, spitting real while ya saliva's like plastic,
Tragic things happen, asskicked by a kid with sporadic spastic rapping actions,
Get you in the casket, lock it then I trash it, planned all of my tactics,
Telepathic, and at last bitch I'm back shit, no return has ever been so massive.

I wish I could still write like that.

[Fa-Q]

When I was little I liked fires,
my nick name was mike myers
I'm with a butcher knife, flattening bike tires,
cutting strings in spite of kite flyers
grab a violin and fight choirs,
with 10 different types of pliers,


good topic Coleon

[Relapse.LP]

Religious pictures inflict shit on non-fictitious victims, sick of this shit, so listen

Nah, I just picked a line out of the first thing I ever posted here.

[Ka0t1c]

even tho i didn't wanna leave my home, it was me who chose to be a G.I. Joe
and now i see it so clearly where my feet should roam while i am steering tryna keep me whole

or

when am i ever gonna get at the end of my debts
cuz i live every chapter pretendin that it is the last
now i'm rememberin back into my past
cuz it did not matter if i had any cash

maybe those...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

C-Riz - Verbal Serial Killer

i'm so magical, i disappear and put a spell on you
wait i'm here,wait i'm there lemme put a next on you
flex you fools sending ya back to the bus
i'm stressing you with every track i adjust
get you off the lane cuz every path i interupt
is filled with my skills and ashes of ya

[Yah-hah]

I lack the hope to ask the coach to be a natural showman,
My flask is open with the lid smashed and broken,
I grapped the rope and attached the note so now I'm back to chokin,
I'm not natural flowin I force my actions to re-enact what happens in the coma of rippin my back back open,
Living in hell trapped and hopeless I was the last one chosen so I'm still halfway frozen,
"The latch was broken so I kicked the casket open",
I mask emotion so I just can't grasp the notion,
I would ask the ocean but when I rap a poem it's too fast a motion,

Got alot of em but first one came to my head

[Solace]

Damn you@McZu

I can't pick one couplet out this piece so:

Flawless Solace flows, awe and woah, how much further can Solace go?
My targets blow, got knives and nines while riding down my polished roads,
Theirs are broke, their cars can't go, 300 enemies, fuck the Spartan jokes,
They're telling me "Stop it yo". Yeah Lil Wayne dope? You just got Rick Roll'd,
And they don't know that I'm back, you rhyme wack as I literally rhyme crack,
If you tried that you'd get sidetracked, you've just fallen into my line trap,
Fast food style, while supersizing multies and flow, I can as I lie back,
Man I bet you're going to try and bite that, why else you think I write tracks?
Find a loophole when I tie ya lyrics in a knot, got every lyric from my heart,
All the spirits from the dark enlightened me to spear shit from the top,
So fuck your thoughts, "You're just a kid" yeah guys I hear it all a lot,
Fuck those dickriders, I'll attack you if you whatsoever appear up on my cock,
Bash hits, mash shit, create a classic, spitting real while ya saliva's like plastic,
Tragic things happen, asskicked by a kid with sporadic spastic rapping actions,
Get you in the casket, lock it then I trash it, planned all of my tactics,
Telepathic, and at last bitch I'm back shit, no return has ever been so massive.

I wish I could still write like that.

if you wrote that, then of course you can still write like that. since you wrote it you've grown older, smarter etc.

you can write better than that, too.

Yeah I know what you're talking about I just feel thats one of my best pieces and its hard to top now. But definitely it was only dope in multies...i can come up with more than just that now.