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Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 9th, '09, 16:01

I stole Stephanie McMahon away from Tripple H
I was like "shut up bitch before you get your nipples raped"
you can catch it on this VHS that the cripples taped
i get so high I even get my pimples baked
i try harder & harder when I have a writers block
...actually I don't you can suck the writers cock
raw is war! shit we call it a war zone
i'm checking at your crib to see if your whores home
she better have my money & a bag of tic tacs
it's really been a minute since i'v made sick tracks
other mc's dickride & lick sacks
get it like this PK spit facts
when i grow up imma blow up like the columbine kids
full of time? full of lines? man im full of rhymes shit!!!!
so kick ya seat back can you just relax fooo?
Em paid me 30 bucks to write relapse 2
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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 9th, '09, 16:14

nice. :y:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 9th, '09, 16:16

eminemgirl1234 wrote:nice. :y:

thanks....I guess ;)
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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 9th, '09, 16:17

Divas in WWE always do their bests

and yeah good drop :y:
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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 9th, '09, 16:18

drama setter wrote:Divas in WWE always do their bests

and yeah good drop :y:



hahaha hell yeah :sweating:
thanks homie
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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 9th, '09, 18:18

Hahahahha i used to love watching that stuff. Good random drop though big homie :8)
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 9th, '09, 18:19

Yah-hah wrote:Hahahahha i used to love watching that stuff. Good random drop though big homie :8)


thanks for the feed glad you liked :happy:
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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby AOBrien09 » Oct 9th, '09, 20:27

nice multies and good flow to it, an abit of humour I like it :shifty:
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Re: Raw Is War (8bar practice verse...nothing special)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 9th, '09, 20:34

thanks for checking it out guys :y:
I'll be dropping more morning practice verses on the daily
NEW AUDIO COMING SOON TOO!! :shifty:
i'm out to hang wit my homies
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