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Never Enough (multi practice)

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Re: Never Enough (multi practice)

Postby J Roc » Oct 10th, '09, 16:01

Wasn't feeeling it Scotty 2 Hottty , Multie's aren't everything you should't have to sacrifice ur whole drop for them. I'd practise em alot more or go back to ur old style :b:

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Re: Never Enough (multi practice)

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 10th, '09, 22:22

Great multies. :y:

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Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
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Re: Never Enough (multi practice)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '09, 21:33

Always dig the multis nicely done London kid :p
But I disaggree with J Roc I think it's cool just focusing on multis with the whole drop. Not really killing the piece. But yo nice drop man :b:
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