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The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 12th, '09, 05:40

Personally my one of my favorite songs just so many dope dope multies. Think I might have already posted it before but no one saw it.

Once I wrote beautiful quotes the very second that I thought em,
So reckless when I got em cause even my best script has a problem,
I threw my necklace to the bottom of the store where I bought em,
Doors open in Sodom won’t close till its August cause that’s when they got us,
That’s when they caught us it was hot like this day,
Tears drop on this page when fear knocks on this cage,
Sittin in the dark just writing these thoughts in my head,
Sit and grip this pen cause your not in my bed,
Wait that’s not what I said forget what I just wrote,
Just skip through this note just rip through this quote,
Listen to this song and flip the dial in my truck,
Try to live awhile with my luck and smile when I’m stuck,
Just face it guy evcen with the laces tied you couldn’t walk a mile in my chucks,
Like 5 nines I’m squeezing just 5 times the reason,
These next 5 lines I’m screamin through blind eyes I’m bleedin,
Time flies when dreamin so I high five my demons,
Tryin not to die breathin with dry eyes the bye byes I’m leavin,
Like Jesus do you see us when the lightning flashes,
All my things mask it till my dreams passes,
I sing rappin as if I might seem past it,
Look how lonf my dream lasted after my wing crashed in,
So I keep askin why I seem fastest and though it might seem drastic,
How does my dream crash in the sky where the lightning’s crafted,
Staring at my dreams ashes in such a frightening casket,
How can I keep laughin it my be magic but still my ring’s plastic,
The one I bought is blackened cause I’m undrafted so I craft it with gold and metal,
Won’t settle with those devils I keep em sleepin with the rose petals,
So keep it on your own level cause my sound produces violence,
I found Medussa’s stylist while playing a brown recluse’s violin

My luck’s no more so I unleash these verses great,
Hurt this fake can’t even hold a piece or burner straight,
In my last bar saying anything just to increase the murder rate,
My words will make you yearn to wait for an early date with the people at the pearly gates.

I roam these streets with my guns like a desperado,
Unsure of which path is best to follow and then the rest will follow,
Unless the bottle gets filled with the air in my lungs till my chest is hollow,
I told Jesus I would smack your cheek just to test his motto,
And unless you borrow a facemask you’ll get your face smashed with your fake ass,
Left bloody and broken your buddy is frozen when I blaze past,
Yeah I aim fast but my trigger finger is alarming,
Leave you smoking like you just left Bob Marley’s block party,
I’ll rock Barbie in her dream house is this a dream now haha not hardly,
With rocket launchers bombarding like the S.W.A.T. Army,
I’m not charming I grew up with the reverse effect,
I’m such a nervous wreck it’s like a birth defect,
Murder threat? I haven’t even killed one person yet,
Each verse I’ve said and purse I get only puts the Earth in debt,
I built my ark but there’s only one spot where the dirt is wet,
I make verses best when I open my mouth the words come out like I had cursive breath,
My worst is best when a lesson seems learned,
The first verse stretched during her pregnancy term,
I shut the door and hugged the floor spit 10 bars all before the doc could cut the chord,
Now I’m fucked for sure in this thunderstorm screaming “FUCK THE LORD”,

My luck’s no more so I unleash these verses great,
Hurt this fake can’t even hold a piece or burner straight,
In my last bar saying anything just to increase the murder rate,
My words will make you yearn to wait for an early date with the people at the pearly gates.

These days are dark and I find no work disgusted with my own work,
But I’ll still slam you through this fine stone Earth until your spine don’t work,
My own curse is to destroy my whole Earth even if I go first,
Using nine old words to just prove that my whole verse is my own work,
I hope you can read fast cause when I breeze past it’s like I breathe last,
Cause this next line will leave fast and we ask that you take a deep laugh, breathe and lean back,
See rap is three tracks of weed smack to re-snap each kneecap back into where it was pre-cracked,
Once you can see past the ski mask you’ll see that I’ve relapsed, re-hatched into this rehab in the back of the world trade centers pre-wrapped package before the planes re-crashed,
Gee that’s kinda un-American kinda fun I swear it’s been kinda fun but I’ma run before I die a terrorist,
Hilarious but true the scariest of news comes precariously through the most various of views,
Very much confused now my roars a low purr so I’m tearing down this poster,
Starin down this poser why you still wearing frowns ya joker?
I’m down to show her around town but I found out that downtown they roundhouse ya slower,
Don’t call me a shady character it’ll take more to find a blonde kid,
Once I tore your spine and snort a line I’m borderline psychotic,
No wait I’m just a veteran I’m excellent,
I’m juggling my sedative with rhetoric I let it slip I’m extra sick slick sickle cell just sits in hell when I don’t take my medicine,
I’m heaven sent I let him get a paper heart through the trailor park,
Each word flies with the edges of my razor sharp raider heart that you can never take apart.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 20:06

Sleepin on me huh :coffee: :coffee:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 13th, '09, 20:08

wow....
all i can is wow.....
:worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 13th, '09, 20:10

DAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYMN :o
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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 20:15

DerdyPK wrote:wow....
all i can is wow.....
:worship: :worship: :worship:


:p Thanks homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby emzee-frenzy » Oct 13th, '09, 20:19

that's fucking dope man. :'(
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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 23:24

emzee-frenzy wrote:that's fucking dope man. :'(


Appreciate it homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 16th, '09, 18:10

bump :tounge2:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 16th, '09, 18:25

just :worship:

Great job, dawg.
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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 16th, '09, 18:48

Termin8er wrote:just :worship:

Great job, dawg.


Thanks homie :b:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 16th, '09, 19:42

Dang Just....mafuckers love you here....that was crazy...I think the second verse was the best and dude...you got a crazy ass vocabulary
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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 16th, '09, 20:29

good job :y: :y:
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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 17th, '09, 07:56

Fa-Q wrote:Dang Just....mafuckers love you here....that was crazy...I think the second verse was the best and dude...you got a crazy ass vocabulary


hahahah yeah man one of my favorites. That Jesus line....dope. :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 17th, '09, 08:01

le tunisien wrote:good job :y: :y:


Appreciate it Tunisien :b:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The mulit's of a psycho

Postby gutawafang » Oct 17th, '09, 13:07

This is crazy SHIT!

See rap is three tracks of weed smack to re-snap each kneecap back into where it was pre-cracked,
Once you can see past the ski mask you’ll see that I’ve relapsed, re-hatched into this rehab in the back of the world trade centers pre-wrapped package before the planes re-crashed, :worship:

Starin down this poser why you still wearing frowns ya joker?
I’m down to show her around town but I found out that downtown they roundhouse ya slower, :worship:

I shut the door and hugged the floor spit 10 bars all before the doc could cut the chord,
Now I’m fucked for sure in this thunderstorm screaming “FUCK THE LORD”, :worship:

Too many dope multis. And definitely dope drop overall. Full marks man. :)
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