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If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 08:26

Little somethin I wrote for somebody real special

If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't weep,
When I have the brightest star shining smiling at me,
I don't need it's light to guide me through the night,
All I need is you there holding me tight,
If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't scream,
About this angel and her kisses I would silently dream,
So save me a spot deep under the covers,
When I can't sleep we can cease being eachother,
If the moon fell tonight I would write in the dark,
Through words I submit every part of my heart,
Invite you in, come and sleep in my soul,
So many hearts have been ripped apart but you're keeping mine whole,
If the moon fell tonight I would hold it in my hands,
Put it in a necklace for you just so you can understand,
All day long I sing sweet words trying to make you blush,
But the moon is full tonight so for now we'll just hush.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 20:01

Man cats are sleepin lately huh :(
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 13th, '09, 20:21

cool you are rolling in the Creative writing section :worship:
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 13th, '09, 20:57

:o damn tawna gives you alotta inspiration....lol and Drama setters right man you own the CW section man....everybody else is shut the fuck out man....hey what about that Lupe song you redid for her
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 13th, '09, 23:26

Fa-Q wrote::o damn tawna gives you alotta inspiration....lol and Drama setters right man you own the CW section man....everybody else is shut the fuck out man....hey what about that Lupe song you redid for her

Yeah man Ima have that one up really soon. It's the He say she say song from food and liquor. I did it dude it's crazy
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby J Roc » Oct 14th, '09, 02:28

Yah-hah wrote:Little somethin I wrote for somebody real special

If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't weep,
When I have the brightest star shining smiling at me,
I don't need it's light to guide me through the night,
All I need is you there holding me tight,
If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't scream,
About this angel and her kisses I would silently dream,
So save me a spot deep under the covers,
When I can't sleep we can cease being eachother,
If the moon fell tonight I would write in the dark,
Through words I submit every part of my heart,
Invite you in, come and sleep in my soul,
So many hearts have been ripped apart but you're keeping mine whole,
If the moon fell tonight I would hold it in my hands,
Put it in a necklace for you just so you can understand,
All day long I sing sweet words trying to make you blush,
But the moon is full tonight so for now we'll just hush.


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Solace » Oct 14th, '09, 03:05

Lmao damn you dropping like at LEAST 1 piece everyday, consistently dropping them dope. How long have you been writing anyways?
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 14th, '09, 03:11

Solace wrote:Lmao damn you dropping like at LEAST 1 piece everyday, consistently dropping them dope. How long have you been writing anyways?

I run CW, 10 month reign isn't gonna be stopped anytime soon. :y:
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 14th, '09, 03:13

MC Anonymous wrote:
Solace wrote:Lmao damn you dropping like at LEAST 1 piece everyday, consistently dropping them dope. How long have you been writing anyways?

I run CW, 10 month reign isn't gonna be stopped anytime soon. :y:


Stop being arrogant for once, haha. Unless you're being sarcastic.

This guy is ruling CW, at the moment.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 14th, '09, 03:15

da.relapse.lp wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
Solace wrote:Lmao damn you dropping like at LEAST 1 piece everyday, consistently dropping them dope. How long have you been writing anyways?

I run CW, 10 month reign isn't gonna be stopped anytime soon. :y:


Stop being arrogant for once, haha. Unless you're being sarcastic.

This guy is ruling CW, at the moment.

I'm not being arrogant, I'm just stating facts. Until he has the consistency to drop 2-3 drops a day for 6 months like I was he can't rule CW. I set the bar for that. :y:
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby gutawafang » Oct 14th, '09, 03:15

Nice one man. I totally loved the whole concept of this. And this line was the best I think:
Invite you in, come and sleep in my soul,
So many hearts have been ripped apart but you're keeping mine whole,

Keep it coming yo. :y:
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 14th, '09, 03:33

At least give feedback to this guy. :y:

And I said, he's ruling it at the moment, unless you have the obligation to drop 2-3 times a day again. Yah-hah is currently dropping at least 2 a day so... if you want to "reclaim your throne", do the same.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 14th, '09, 03:36

Dang I just came back had like 10 comments :p ok here we go...
J Roc-yeah man I'm trying thanks homie
Coleon-thanks bro :p
Solace-appreciate it homie. Been writing for awhile now. Basically since my sophmore year in high school. I'm a fresh in college now. Got a book coming, most these cats got a album comin but I got a book :p
relapse-hahaha thanks man I'm tryin
Fish-Thanks man there is a song called that and I wrote this to her cause she liked the song and it reminded her of me.
MC Anon-Yo man I'm just doin wat I can. Yo set that bar so dog gone high dude :p
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 14th, '09, 03:38

da.relapse.lp wrote:At least give feedback to this guy. :y:

And I said, he's ruling it at the moment, unless you have the obligation to drop 2-3 times a day again. Yah-hah is currently dropping at least 2 a day so... if you want to "reclaim your throne", do the same.

I agree with at the moment, fine. Just I kinda feel like people forgot about Anon :(
Also I didn't feed the piece cause' it's not my cup of tea.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 14th, '09, 03:40

MC Anonymous wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:At least give feedback to this guy. :y:

And I said, he's ruling it at the moment, unless you have the obligation to drop 2-3 times a day again. Yah-hah is currently dropping at least 2 a day so... if you want to "reclaim your throne", do the same.

I agree with at the moment, fine. Just I kinda feel like people forgot about Anon :(
Also I didn't feed the piece cause' it's not my cup of tea.


Does it feel that bad not to rule? :confusion:
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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