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Sagita

Postby gutawafang » Oct 17th, '09, 03:52

If this is love, how do I express when I can’t even reach you?
Fan letters you don’t read, do I get your attention if I diss you?
Like Eminem did to Mariah one beautiful morning?
Produce a song like “The Warning” without warning?
How do I get a celebrity’s attention? It’s a question
Smack your face like Chris Brown, or language aggression?
Question marks fill a verse up, it’s the latest fashion
Of rap music to display my lovely expressions
Why is it you? And why do I fall deeper every minute?
Why’s a singer interrupting my life, so intervening
I need a sign, a smile would be considered hinting
Clouds and the rain, and a scene to be painted
Flowers to represent, and the blue skies to show
The bright sun to enlighten, guide us to our fate
Sagita Gutawa, all of you guys should know
That she’s the bride that I’m willing to wait
For.

Took me exactly 8 minutes. :sweating:
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Re: Sagita

Postby Emadyville » Oct 17th, '09, 03:55

def not bad for 8 minutes, the warning line was pretty cool haha :y:
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Re: Sagita

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 17th, '09, 07:57

Yeah like he said warning line was ill :y:
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Re: Sagita

Postby gutawafang » Oct 17th, '09, 12:47

Thank you guys for the constant feeds. :happy:
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Re: Sagita

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 17th, '09, 12:48

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah like he said warning line was ill :y:


Yeah, that shit was sick. :y:
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Re: Sagita

Postby gutawafang » Oct 17th, '09, 12:53

Termin8er wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Yeah like he said warning line was ill :y:


Yeah, that shit was sick. :y:

Thank you. :)
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