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Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 17th, '09, 19:05

Call me that I try to be the "master of words"
An ass never learns... it's not a matter of verbs
It's a "matter of hurt", not who can get to the
Thesaurus faster to prove you're "English-tough"
I know you're angry when you lose... you beat shit rough
Writing a book, dude?
You can't have a novel with one chapter
My puns shatter you in a fun splatter
Like you were the one latter
Can't stop dick-riding J-Roc's style?
When we read your shit, we may not smile
Anymore... what happened to your old self?
But wait: your old rhymes are on a cold shelf
Look at you, embarrassing yourself
You say that my rhymes make zero sense...
Who's late for class? English is at the nine (9 AM)
Gotta a fetish for big rhymes?
Say my avatar's rainbow, it's "Main Source"
Couldn't see that? You're brain's coarse
I drain force with a thunder that rapes Thor's
MC Anonymous wrote:Psyonic electro-genetic telekinesis
undulating magnetism
as I'm writing this thesis
molecular constructs

Please, explain to us what that means
Of all your whack things... that was the bad bean
MC Anonymous wrote:Not true, asexual reproduction can happen as well as sexual reproduction. However, it is ''natural'' for a male and female to have sex and reproduce.

Proves the only sex you get is masturbation
You "quote" natural...? Does self-sex give you satisfaction?
Anon is the bio-teacher now?
But still dissing me on my own ground?
Who the fuck called me out twice
To you, winning "E-Battle" rounds is life
I'll pound some light into his sounds of blight
What you're missing is a mound of right
Always wrong like a pendulum out of swing
MC Anonymous wrote:I know what it's like to be the only person there
and your trying to be pure as a lonely virgin scared
People redicule and tease, cause' they don't know who you are
when they see you in the halls, they just wanna use your arms

Suffering from anxiety and being bullied
A stupid Puerto Rican kid, bitch, show me
If you grew any taller from your last pic
A whack kid... hair combed like "Hair-Spray"
Faggots so ignorant like you are a rare case
Fuck being personal in your raps... like we give a fuck?
This is a EMINEM forum, you're in shit and stuck
Can't get a social life out of here
So you resort to forum venting about your "fear"
Of random shit... Act so arrogant
No longer can we all bare with fags
When you drop, we fall asleep like lectures
Serial-killer wanna-be like Lector...
Recognize this diss verse's shit structure?
So even if this verse is whack
Remember you're calling Anon's burn bad
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 17th, '09, 19:33

da.relapse.lp wrote:Call me that I try to be the "master of words"
An ass never learns... it's not a matter of verbs
It's a "matter of hurt", not who can get to the
Thesaurus faster to prove you're "English-tough"
I know you're angry when you lose... you beat shit rough
Writing a book, dude?
You can't have a novel with one chapter
My puns shatter you in a fun splatter
Like you were the one latter
Can't stop dick-riding J-Roc's style?
When we read your shit, we may not smile
Anymore... what happened to your old self?
But wait: your old rhymes are on a cold shelf
Look at you, embarrassing yourself
You say that my rhymes make zero sense...
Who's late for class? English is at the nine (9 AM)
Gotta a fetish for big rhymes?
Say my avatar's rainbow, it's "Main Source"
Couldn't see that? You're brain's coarse
I drain force with a thunder that rapes Thor's

MC Anonymous wrote:Psyonic electro-genetic telekinesis
undulating magnetism
as I'm writing this thesis
molecular constructs


Psionics is the study and/or practice of using the mind to induce paranormal phenomena. Examples of this include telepathy, telekinesis and other workings of the outside world through the psyche. Ye I spelled it wrong but I was rushing when I wrote it. basically means I was writing with magnetism. (you know, pens have metal springs to make the top of it pop out, right?

Please, explain to us what that means
Of all your whack things... that was the bad bean
MC Anonymous wrote:Not true, asexual reproduction can happen as well as sexual reproduction. However, it is ''natural'' for a male and female to have sex and reproduce.

Proves the only sex you get is masturbation
You "quote" natural...? Does self-sex give you satisfaction?
Anon is the bio-teacher now?
But still dissing me on my own ground?
Who the fuck called me out twice
To you, winning "E-Battle" rounds is life
I'll pound some light into his sounds of blight
What you're missing is a mound of right
Always wrong like a pendulum out of swing
MC Anonymous wrote:I know what it's like to be the only person there
and your trying to be pure as a lonely virgin scared
People redicule and tease, cause' they don't know who you are
when they see you in the halls, they just wanna use your arms

Suffering from anxiety and being bullied
A stupid Puerto Rican kid, bitch, show me
If you grew any taller from your last pic
A whack kid... hair combed like "Hair-Spray"
Faggots so ignorant like you are a rare case
Fuck being personal in your raps... like we give a fuck?
This is a EMINEM forum, you're in shit and stuck
Can't get a social life out of here
So you resort to forum venting about your "fear"
Of random shit... Act so arrogant
No longer can we all bare with fags
When you drop, we fall asleep like lectures
Serial-killer wanna-be like Lector...
Recognize this diss verse's shit structure?
So even if this verse is whack
Remember you're calling Anon's burn bad


Besides that brief explanation, this was better then the last diss. Although your rhymes diminished heavily your flow and structure was better, way better. Personals were lacking again, nothing that made me go ''Oh shit.'' The book thing was an obvious punch, because everyone knows one chapter isn't a novel. Taking that bit from Serious Debate was a nice touch, however the way you brought it on wasn't. I quoted natural to prove a point, and you flipped the meaning to it. Kinda makes the punch weaker then it would have been if you went a different route. However, this diss made me respect you more. Good job, it's an 7/10 rather then the 5/10 your last diss was with Yah-Hah. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 17th, '09, 19:42

def not bad :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby arowler » Oct 17th, '09, 19:43

good shit man
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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 17th, '09, 19:48

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:no one can kill anon like scotty can :shifty:

:angry: True... :angry:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 17th, '09, 19:49

I bet Anon is coming at it again right now. :whistle:

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:no one can kill anon like scotty can :shifty:


Roar.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Kidtrick18 » Oct 17th, '09, 19:50

My words are like a dagger with a jagged edge
That'll stab you in the head
whether you're a fag or lez
Or the homosex, hermaph or a trans-a-vest
Pants or dress - hate fags? The answer's "yes"
Homophobic? Nah, you're just heterophobic
Starin' at my jeans, watchin my genitals bulgin (Ooh!)
That's my motherfuckin balls, you'd better let go of 'em
They belong in my scrotum, you'll never get hold of 'em
Hey, it's me, Versace
Whoops, somebody shot me!
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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 17th, '09, 19:58

da.relapse.lp wrote:I bet Anon is coming at it again right now. :whistle:

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:no one can kill anon like scotty can :shifty:


Roar.

Nah, you dissed, I dissed. That's all that is needed. I don't feel like having more beefs, this whole thing only happened cause' I purposely wanted to expose Yah-Hah for not being ''humble.'' If he was he wouldn't have made the diss. So my work is accomplished. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 17th, '09, 20:03

MC Anonymous wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:I bet Anon is coming at it again right now. :whistle:

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:no one can kill anon like scotty can :shifty:


Roar.

Nah, you dissed, I dissed. That's all that is needed. I don't feel like having more beefs, this whole thing only happened cause' I purposely wanted to expose Yah-Hah for not being ''humble.'' If he was he wouldn't have made the diss. So my work is accomplished. :y:


Yah-hah is humble enough, unlike you, but it's all good. :flower:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 17th, '09, 20:16

this was a better diss than the last one :smoking:
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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 17th, '09, 20:53

da.relapse.lp wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Nah, you dissed, I dissed. That's all that is needed. I don't feel like having more beefs, this whole thing only happened cause' I purposely wanted to expose Yah-Hah for not being ''humble.'' If he was he wouldn't have made the diss. So my work is accomplished. :y:


Yah-hah is humble enough, unlike you, but it's all good. :flower:

:( I'm not arrogant though. Usually I'm a pretty humble dude just for the past couple of days I've been feeling edgy lol :y:
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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 17th, '09, 22:12

:'(
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '09, 02:20

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:no one can kill anon like scotty can :shifty:

I bet you anything that I could put out an Anonymous diss that would kill him more than you would. I'm closer with him, I had TONS of shit on him that you wouldn't imagine. So w.igga please.
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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '09, 02:25

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
Solace wrote:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:no one can kill anon like scotty can :shifty:

I bet you anything that I could put out an Anonymous diss that would kill him more than you would. I'm closer with him, I had TONS of shit on him that you wouldn't imagine. So w.igga please.


problem found. he has enough shit to kill u back.

w1gger please.

No he doesn't, you wouldn't believe what I have on him. He's told me many times I'd be the only one that'd best him on TR. I ain't going to be humble for shit. And I'm not white either.
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Re: Can't Get Over Me (Anon Reponse)

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '09, 02:27

Yes you did, but I was saying that I have more shit on him than you, I'd have more shit on him than he would on me, therefore I would best him. And anything he has on me would be wack and easily flipped.
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