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The Finisher (da.relapse.lp)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 18th, '09, 17:43

Da.relapse.lp has a bitch this bitch is infertile, she don be able to CONCIEVE//
ill roll up on her like christopher reeve, let loose with what i got stuck on my SLEEVE//(haha)

You gonna learn to respect me or you get put in check b your once hot spit just got turned into a wrecked FREE//(haha wat am i sayin hot never mind haha)

Ill ring ya neck g tie you up and throw u in a hefty, how gangsta is relapse.lp? he admitted to watchin pornos wit JET LEE//

I send ya brain through ya scalp Mc and macdaddy = multies that keep u runnin’ to ur HOUSE im to hot when you click this thread it prolly send flames through ya MOUSE//

I put blood stains through ya blouse if you spit half as hot as i did it prolly send pain through ya MOUTH//

I was gonna feed from your verse but it’s in a state of starvation, the worse thing your mom did was not get the TERMINATION//

she could never come back from the accident witch would be you never came up wid a good EXPLANATION//

this the finisher!!!

You a hex to me time to shatter this curse, only reason you want a challenger is so that you can REVERSE//

Revise and try disperse a verse, ill kill you an still put a grenade in ya hearse, tell me who’s WORSE/
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Re: The Finisher (da.relapse.lp)

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 18th, '09, 17:46

macdaddy019967 wrote:Da.relapse.lp has a bitch this bitch is infertile, she don be able to CONCIEVE//
ill roll up on her like christopher reeve, let loose with what i got stuck on my SLEEVE//(haha)

You gonna learn to respect me or you get put in check b your once hot spit just got turned into a wrecked FREE//(haha wat am i sayin hot never mind haha)

Ill ring ya neck g tie you up and throw u in a hefty, how gangsta is relapse.lp? he admitted to watchin pornos wit JET LEE//

I send ya brain through ya scalp Mc and macdaddy = multies that keep u runnin’ to ur HOUSE im to hot when you click this thread it prolly send flames through ya MOUSE//

I put blood stains through ya blouse if you spit half as hot as i did it prolly send pain through ya MOUTH//

I was gonna feed from your verse but it’s in a state of starvation, the worse thing your mom did was not get the TERMINATION//

she could never come back from the accident witch would be you never came up wid a good EXPLANATION//

this the finisher!!!

You a hex to me time to shatter this curse, only reason you want a challenger is so that you can REVERSE//

Revise and try disperse a verse, ill kill you an still put a grenade in ya hearse, tell me who’s WORSE/


Did I really? :confusion:

State facts, baby. :whistle:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: The Finisher (da.relapse.lp)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 18th, '09, 17:50

thanks for the read :b:
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Re: The Finisher (da.relapse.lp)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 18th, '09, 18:05

Amadeo wrote:pretty fucking wack, dude.

& you even bit an eminem punchline "i'll roll up on her like christopher reeve."

ok i had 2 to put out ima go back in my cave and try something else
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Re: The Finisher (da.relapse.lp)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 18th, '09, 18:06

Coleon wrote:wackest shit i've ever read

:D lol
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Re: The Finisher (da.relapse.lp)

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 18th, '09, 18:14

In your previous diss, you sound so fucking immature...
You think I'll let you get the lucky "Finisher"?
Collaborated with Anon and got something dope
Now it sounds like you're rapping while getting choked
Dude, please, so who's your "Ghost-Writers"?
You disguise your "Fake-ness" worse than "Most-Biters"

I don't think it's worth my time to write a full diss, but what I just said completely destroys what you said in terms of facts, not lies.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: The Finisher (da.relapse.lp)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 19th, '09, 10:09

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