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ehh fuck this, bitches its creative

Postby tjb » Oct 21st, '09, 01:18

there hating, my lines is discriminated
if they see tht ill be the illest
maby theyd be a bit more grateful
but maby its my fault tr,
i may have nvr rit a whole page yo
but at the same time, with these lines
youve never seen my full rage tho
see i dont rele get angry, i try to ignore the sadness
i dont have much emotion
but when it rele matters i nvr blow ma composure
see if you rele wanna provoke me into madness i dare ya
ill go full blown record flows so intimindating it'll scare ya





hold up fuck this fuck you solace
or should i say epiphany
what are you a skitzofrinic
add another to your list faggot tiffany
sick of your bad jabs, there sad wont let them get to me
just got to set them straight befor they become the end of me
see if my lines dont come at the right time
then bitch im fine with tht see ive got devotion
my rhymes is loaded weaponry, potent, potential see
your in loathing, and dont have shit on me
what are you gonna say to this
either way its hit or miss
an im assuming strike three
bitch hit me back im lookin for some mic beef
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Re: ehh fuck this, bitches its creative

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 02:41

lol.
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Re: ehh fuck this, bitches its creative

Postby Solace » Oct 21st, '09, 03:49

Did you just try to diss me by calling me Tiffany?
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Re: ehh fuck this, bitches its creative

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 21st, '09, 04:22

Solace wrote:Did you just try to diss me by calling me Tiffany?


lol I think he did :pizza:
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