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Untouchable

Postby mcZu » Oct 23rd, '09, 00:40

Wrote this to Tupac's Untouchable, feedback is appreciated.

Cross my path and I’ll put ya ass in the Vatican
Don’t ask I’ll pass I’m asking you if you’re mad at them
Medusa effected mannequins
Make mo’ moves than these men with pen’s
No need for a magazine to leave ya chest out like King
Stop acting as a king and start acting as King
I’m an assassin you’re just ass as in
Bang bro’s bunch of Davinci hoes
Thinking they fly while they dying to trick me like Houdini shows
Y’all come with that bitchy sound
Like a blind man enjoying his Twistys account
Twisted bitches that amount to nothing
Only time they sick is in bed with a man they cuffing
Leave ‘em in-hell like air going a lung in
They boxed in ‘cause I think outta the box
Stop claiming you dealing with bad boys like the LOX
Like Koch records Zu is thee one
Me and the pen are in control of your heir call me avatar aang
Y’all are as pointless as Kanye’s chick buying hair products
Sorry for interrupting I’m here like pockets
And denim to fire up and end ‘em
Like Uri Geller does a spoon I’ll bend ‘em
And then I’ll see if everything matters like shady blabla
You dick heads are pussy I refer to y’all as lady Gaga
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Re: Untouchable

Postby Almostlity » Oct 23rd, '09, 00:42

mcZu wrote:And then I’ll see if everything matters like shady blabla
You dick heads are pussy I refer to y’all as lady Gaga


:laughing: :laughing:

''My music, awesome, untouchable aha. Your music awful, so touchable aha.''

j/k, good job once again bro :b: :y:
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> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


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Re: Untouchable

Postby mcZu » Oct 23rd, '09, 00:59

^Thanks Almostlity, appreciate it. :b:
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Re: Untouchable

Postby gutawafang » Oct 23rd, '09, 04:15

The dope thing bout you is the constant nameplay in your drops. Original shit yo. Dope. :worship:
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Re: Untouchable

Postby mcZu » Oct 23rd, '09, 19:52

^Thanks Guta, appreciate it. :b:
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Re: Untouchable

Postby mcZu » Oct 28th, '09, 23:32

Bump b b bump bump b b b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
Bump b b bump bump b bump b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
(Just Blaze)
Bump b b bump bump it up
We gon do it like (Uuh, uuh, uuh)
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