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a little ditty for most of us

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a little ditty for most of us

Postby paulmichael89 » Oct 25th, '09, 04:47

Creature of Habit

Crash landing into the pit
She’s waste deep in the mud
An innocent kid
Void, rejected from love
Momma’s in a maze,
Sitting head to her knees
Poppa said he aint ready
No ones seen him for weeks

She pulled herself from the ground
Peaked through the space in the fence
Surrounded by countless opaque flowers
A warm breath grabbed her neck
“this is no place to hide”
Said three beasts inching near
She shot ‘em a smile
They stuck their tongues in her ear

Invisibly rabid,
When you all share disease
A creature of habit
Blooming nature’s seed
Scars of attrition
Plague the hands and the feet
A primitive existence
A heart beating off key

A stranger paves his way
She’s creeping in the abyss
Stalking her pray,
Scratching his itch
One may walk on
Said her eyes with a snarl
Yesterdays innocence
Fuse the bars of tomorrow
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Re: a little ditty for most of us

Postby paulmichael89 » Oct 27th, '09, 00:40

is this forum just for raps or do poems get comments too?
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Re: a little ditty for most of us

Postby classthe_king » Oct 27th, '09, 00:48

POEMS RECIEVE NO COMMENTS!




NONE!
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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