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Re: New Style, Check it Please :)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 26th, '09, 07:26

kinda random to me.

especially:
now i just gotta shoot somebody and brag like fifty cent
repeat 'you know what im saying' fifty times an interview like eminem

and some lines are pretty harsh and direct like
im tired of being nagged at, by my mother and father
especially my dad, you fuckin ugly motherfucker dont bother
me oh was that a subliminal, didn't mean to call u ugly mommy

still it's quite okay. I understand you were drunk. LOL
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Re: New Style, Check it Please :)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 26th, '09, 23:25

Idk if this was true or not :unsure: But like Guta said this was really random.
repeat 'you know what im saying' fifty times an interview like eminem

Multis were alright, flow was alright. But try to tone down the f bombs. I know this is rap but come on.
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