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Postby ShaBruv » Oct 27th, '09, 22:13

This is my first full song but u may have heard me on Demon doors by me



Listen-Karnivoaar Yo this is to Kanos'Hustler instrumental


yh yh yh yh
Karnivooaar

Never heard of a rhyme like this
Delve knee deep in the rap abyss
Ready urself for a lyrical bliss
Better than me, nah it don't exist

Burn to a 'D 'n' listen in ur car
We'll stick together like bricks and tar
Kick my shit and u will go far
So infectious bar by bar

I'll admit i aint no player
Neva wanna be one, sed no prayer
All aspired is an ill rhyme sprayer
king of the world and hip hop mayor

All sed and done thats what i wanna do
These are the dreams that i do pursue
Best in the world thats gotta be true
And i aint even put out my debut

(haha)
gap
Chorusx2
Listen to these lyrics and hear it dawg as i spill it, i kill it ,i hope ya feel it
so sit back and just chill it.
My rhymes are like a tool kit, My boredom used to fuel it, i know it sounds oldschool shit
but screw it im gonna do it.

Hey looky now its the 2nd verse
What should i do could it ever be worse
Will i get better will my bubble burst
Will i ever lose this hip hop thirst

Noone knows but that i can change
Shape the world with a lyrics exchange
Calm y'all down and stop the rage
Capture Gordon Brown and put him in a cage

Bag Obama and put him in a zoo
And unless u pipe down next its you
See all these people now know what to do
Listen to me and they will get through

What's called life but now it's all wrong
Like a soap opera sorta like a song
Controversy always comes along
You need to listen to someone who's strong

(haha)
gap
Chorusx 2

3rd verse now so go out with a bang
Only use English no rap slang
Don't be a thug hear me god damn
It aint frikken cool to be part of a gang

If ya get involved ya gonna look like a fool
Work hard at your studies and go to school
It may seem naff but in the long run its cool
I mean LOOK AT ME AND SAY I DON'T RULE

I'm sure by now you will be grinnin
Cuz you realised that i am winnin
You over like an old skool villain
Make u laugh like overdose on penicllen ( really fast bit)

Listen to my rap and hear me roar
See ya next time on my world wide tour
You'll love me that i am sure
Cuz Karnivoar addiction got no cure

Chorusx2





Tell me what you think
and if u havent already guessed Karnivoarr is my rap name
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: Pay Attention

Postby bapetlk » Dec 30th, '09, 16:18

what are u 10?
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