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10-28-'09

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10-28-'09

Postby mcZu » Oct 28th, '09, 22:09

Listen… I’m over people heads like a yamukah
An Arabic emcee utilizing electronica
So I elect the correct monitor statements when I’m after the
Shining essence like tonic water bulbs
I don’t fuck with that pop shit like a bottle of corona
My core roars from above the
Atmosphere shining like a menorah
Bunch of under classed emcees spiting ‘bout pushing weight
I’m like a horizontal figure of eight
Y’all are like a festival of light rappers I call it Hanukah
Y’all winning is like an Arab at a Bar mitzvah
The bar is the end and bye like clientele
I spit heat, this man on fire just like Denzel
So I excel without mentioning the 38, 47 and the 9 like Excel
Then I exceed like cumin last week and yell
I’m still here like snatching a toupee
Like a preposition plus mispronouncing say I yell touché
It’s Zu’s day without the hammers like starting bored
You couldn’t son Zu if you were a father reading the art of war
Fly mind like Armani y ‘all have wack minds
Ignorant like thinking the heart is totally on the left side
It’s hard to leave the left side and get back, stupid
And then back to the rhymes like lines made of spinal fluid
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Re: 10-28-'09

Postby classthe_king » Oct 28th, '09, 22:55

Nice shit zu. Dope wordplay as usual. Im pretty sure i got all your punches. Nice Job :worship:
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Re: 10-28-'09

Postby mcZu » Oct 28th, '09, 23:21

classthe_king wrote:Nice shit zu. Dope wordplay as usual. Im pretty sure i got all your punches. Nice Job :worship:

Thanks Classy, appreciate it.
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