Hell On Earth

[Tranquil]

Verse 1:
Hell is rising to earth,
They were down there planning this since your birth,
Storms hanging over New York City,
Man this day has turned out to be shitty,
Rite there in the middle of central park,
Is where its going down, and its all dark,
People running for there lives,
Trying to doge that crazy guy throwing knifes,
The ground is heating up as the devil rises,
Lots of new Yorkers staring in despisers,
Temperatures about 108,
As the devil passes the New York gate,
Killing everybody that is in his way,
Flicking everybody like he was bug spray,
The Storms are getting out of control,
As me and annnomynos guard on patrol,

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[TiBon]

Verse 1:
Hell is rising to earth,
They were down there planning this since your birth,
Storms hanging over New York City,
Man this day has turned out to be shitty,
Rite 1 there in the middle of central park,
Is where its going down, and its all dark,
People running for there 2 lives,
Trying to doge that crazy guy throwing knifes,3
The ground is heating up as the devil rises,
Lots of new Yorkers staring in despisers,
Temperatures about 108,
As the devil passes the New York gate,
Killing everybody that is in his way,
Flicking everybody like he was bug spray, 4
The Storms are getting out of control,
As me and annnomynos guard on patrol,

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1=right
2=their
3=too stretched
4=too ramdom

In general it's not something too good and it's not something too bad, I think the theme of the song does not match in hip-hop... or it just don't attract me, btw have you get the title Hell On Earth by the same album of Mobb Deep?

[classthe_king]

annnomynos

lmao, is that suppossed to be anonymous?

But i think this is a fine subject matter for hip-hop, story telling. What country do you live in though?

[Tranquil]

annnomynos

lmao, is that suppossed to be anonymous?

But i think this is a fine subject matter for hip-hop, story telling. What country do you live in though?

lol yes it is, and i live in America

[Tranquil]

Verse 1:
Hell is rising to earth,
They were down there planning this since your birth,
Storms hanging over New York City,
Man this day has turned out to be shitty,
Rite 1 there in the middle of central park,
Is where its going down, and its all dark,
People running for there 2 lives,
Trying to doge that crazy guy throwing knifes,3
The ground is heating up as the devil rises,
Lots of new Yorkers staring in despisers,
Temperatures about 108,
As the devil passes the New York gate,
Killing everybody that is in his way,
Flicking everybody like he was bug spray, 4
The Storms are getting out of control,
As me and annnomynos guard on patrol,

Please leave feedback

1=right
2=their
3=too stretched
4=too ramdom

In general it's not something too good and it's not something too bad, I think the theme of the song does not match in hip-hop... or it just don't attract me, btw have you get the title Hell On Earth by the same album of Mobb Deep?

No i didnt, i just herd the beat, and thort of Little Nicky, and started riting about the devil coming up, and just called it "Hell On Earth" and sorry for the mistakes, when i write, i dont really worry about spelling, just quickly jot it down

[TiBon]

Yeah you have right, it's not that it's not suit to hip-hop, i just don't like so dark themes in music...

[Rain Matrix]

not bad I thought the flow was pretty good